| Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters
| 25 Mar 2014 5:44 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying this very much. I think that Remus suspects that Snape is the one who hurt Harry.
| Title: Chapter 9 - Layovers and Lies
| 25 Mar 2014 5:23 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 1 - Unexpected Visitor
| 24 Mar 2014 5:11 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I realize that I am beginning to read an incomplete story. However, this first chapter is so brilliant that I simply don't care.
I do understand that I very likely may eat those words. But, if the next 20 chapters are as good as this, then I do not really mind.
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 03 Aug 2013 11:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Vandr (Signed)
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Oh, why do I read unfinished stories!?
The "update" date is deperessing, to say the least, and my feeling of heartbreak at another story's premature ending is only rivaled by my love for it.
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 24 Jul 2013 2:29 am
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| Reviewer: Aleonora (Signed)
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That moment, when you see the date of last update... :(
Ok, if you ever read this, could you please (!) consider, I mean, really consider, to continue this gem?
Because it is epic! So epic, I can't even put it in words! It's just so convincing! I literally could not stop reading before I finished!
Just wish there were more Snapes out there like the one in O Mine Enemy...
Best moment ever:
"Harry almost felt like saying, if he will, I will, but…that seemed a little childish under the circumstances, not to mention after the firm scolding he’d just been handed. So instead, he issued a mumbled and contrite, “yes, sir.”
“Severus?” Dumbledore prodded.
“I will if he will,” Snape responded dryly."
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 16 Jul 2013 12:28 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Please Update! I love your story.
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 04 May 2013 5:20 am
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| Reviewer: SimplyFox (Anonymous)
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Psssssssst hey.
Your story is really super and I love it a ton (ohmygoodnessiloveitsomuch)
But I think I died a little inside when I saw you hadn't updated in five years....
I just want you to know that if you ever decide to delve back into the dark depths of this black hole that is fanfiction,
I'll be here.
Waiting.
If not I hope you enjoy your life.
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 04 May 2013 5:20 am
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| Reviewer: SimplyFox (Anonymous)
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Psssssssst hey.
Your story is really super and I love it a ton (ohmygoodnessiloveitsomuch)
But I think I died a little inside when I saw you hadn't updated in five years....
I just want you to know that if you ever decide to delve back into the dark depths of this black hole that is fanfiction,
I'll be here.
Waiting.
If not I hope you enjoy your life.
| Title: Chapter 1 - Unexpected Visitor
| 25 Apr 2013 6:53 pm
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Great start! I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I see that you haven't written any more on it since 2008? Please finish it so I can finish reading it :)
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 04 Mar 2012 3:56 am
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| Reviewer: kiragecko (Signed)
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Very few people can hint at things without making the characters seem stupid for not figuring them out. That you walk that balance so deftly is impressive. Also, this is the only story about Snape I've read that manages to keep him a jerk and still build a believable, enjoyable relationship between him and Potter. Finally, the story is awesome. Thank you.
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