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Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 31 Jan 2008 12:46 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this story is great but something has just occured to me, how are harry and snape relieving themselves if they are locked in a room
Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 30 Jan 2008 2:45 am
Reviewer: Z (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoy reading this fic. You have done a really good job of keeping Snape canon while building his relationship with Harry. This is one of the best Harry mentors Snapes fics I've read (and i've read a lot...) Thanks for sharing and please update soon!
Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 23 Jan 2008 4:53 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    The entire discussion between Snape and Harry was brilliantly done. They both are so believable and I especially loved Harry's realization that it hadn't been that hard to confide in Snape. His finally internal monologue about hating Snape was a great continuation of how you have conceptualized Harry. He is still young and this comes through in your story.
Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 23 Jan 2008 12:18 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so unbealivably happy you updated! I LOVE reading this story, it's so entertaining, emotional, thoughtful, deep, interesting, and exceiting. It's also very realistic, I can imagine J.K. Rowling putting this in her books. You keep everyone so extreamly well in character, and thier revealing thoughts fit them so well. You are an amazing writer, I envy you! That thing about Snape seeing Harry as a bay was both funny and cute! I'd LOVE for you to make a sequal, your plans for it sound great. PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!

    P.S. Are you interested in RPing? If so, there is this site I go to and I think you'd make a wonderful Harry. Maybe Dumbledore? Just let me know and we can discuss it ^_^
Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 21 Jan 2008 3:46 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NICE!!!!! I love how you wrote this chapter. Please please please finish this story!!! Again GREAT JOB!
Title: Chapter 18 - A Lesson in Being Slytherin 21 Jan 2008 2:02 am
Reviewer: caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow you really know how to get the old lump in the throat going don't you??!! This about the third time I have cried reading this fic! - love it by the way!
Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 20 Jan 2008 12:34 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you very much for updating!
Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 20 Jan 2008 8:56 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful long chapter! Although the ending... well that's just not cool. :P Pretty please find time to update this aweseome story again soon!
Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 20 Jan 2008 6:39 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Your going to kill me Kirby! I'm going to be dead, dead, dead!
    Death by suspense. Whoever thought it couldn't happen was wrong, my dead body will be proof of it.

    I'll leave something for you in my will.

    Ok, enough with the weirdness, (grin) I loved this chapter! I squeled when I heard that you had updated. There might be a few people a few miles away who didn't here me. Lol. :)

    I loved how you explained Harry's fear and how Snape responded. Cool Snape, calm Snape. Hehe!

    Or calm most of the time his scream fest was very fun to read about. When tempers rise the readers will cheer!

    The Chapter end notes and when Harry was thinking to himself in this chapter had a lot of (if's) in it. I think I understood how Harry must have been feeling. Nothing is clear, anything can happen, may the force be with you. Lol, I really hope you will write a sequel after this one.

    Thank you for updating! I love it when I have new material to read. A new chapter from this story is better then chocalate!

    Well now you know what happens when I review late at night when I should be (yawn!) sleeping. I hope I didn't ramble to much, thanks for responding to my last review. Only a few authors do that and I really like to hear responses. Great chapter and great story. :)

    You make my life complete! :)
    Scorpia
Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 20 Jan 2008 4:36 am
Reviewer: Ellie K (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so happy to see that you've updated. Great chapter, well worth the wait!

    I love how things depend not only on Harry trusting Snape, but on Snape trusting Harry. Snape has some real doubts about the plan and maybe, once he sees a seemingly invincible Voldemort, he will decide to stay on the winning side and leave Harry in the basement... (ok, I'm betting that you won't give us such a horribly bleak ending, but maybe it's something that Harry will come to fear?)

    Seriously, I'm getting chills just thinking of what that poor kid is going to be facing. And Snape too... having to play the part of nasty death eater to the point where he might have to torture Harry... *shudder* Because Snape has already done things in this story that demonstrate care for Harry (not that he'll admit it), things that go beyond immediately preserving Harry's life. And now to have to torture the child... You've set up such an absorbing, painful and thorny situation for them both, and I can foresee a series of chapters that end on gut-wrenching cliffhangers.

    I liked their conversation at the end there, and I also want to know all the reasons Snape was so hell-bent on hating Harry. But right now, at this point, he didn't say, "Potter, I hate you." He said, "Potter, I don't like you." (which from Snape is practically a declaration of love). So he doesn't hate Harry anymore, though Harry probably doesn't get that yet - and Snape probably doesn't realize it either. They're both so dense about these things.

    And Harry's worst fear is so real and wrenching. I wish Snape would just give him a hug already. But I like how you're pacing their relationship.

    Your story is seriously one of the best out there, and I hope you update soon!

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