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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
“Once. I sneered; you cried. It was very satisfying.” **I laughed outloud. I shouted for joy when I saw you had updated and received strange looks. But honestly, the fact that you updated just made my entire weekend. So thank you. Harry was perfect in this chapter--his uncertainty, the way he kept awkwardly smoothing down his fringe, his outbursts. I love how you've characterized him. Your Snape is quite witty, which makes me adore him. You've added dry humor to this story, which I completely love. I marvel at your ability to keep Snape in character for so long. Makes me want to throw my story onto the floor and smash it with my shoe. I wonder if their mentor-ish relationship will develop any further--they aren't close by any means but it's strangely satisfying to read. The dialogue---oh, yes the dialogue--is stunning. And it's so realistic with all of Harry's 'ums' and 'ers'... And now, I'm nervous. The thought of Harry locked away in a dark basement is quite terrifying. But I can't wait to see what you do with this story. You know how to keep your audience in healthy suspense ;) This was brilliant, as always. And long (thank you!) Write soon!
Great chapter! Can't decided if I love the cliffy or hate it. Oh well, update soon. Did I mention this was an amazing chapter? Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I certainly hope it's love, not hate... ;)
I LOVE misunderstandings! There so fun add Harry and Snape and there that much better! Author's Response: Yes, misunderstandings are the spice of life. ;) Or, okay, maybe the resolving of understandings is a little bit cooler...
Your way is better. Lol :) I am rereading the whole story. I have read it on fanfiction net and here but I like reading it here better because I can make the text bigger. I really like the scene were Harry is eating those canned peaches, Sluurrp! Lol Scorpia Author's Response: Yum...I'm getting a craving right now for canned peaches myself! LOL!
I like how you wrote the Dursleys. A lot of people write them as being totally horrible so much so that it's just not beleivable. Your way is belivable. Poor Harry! Getting that carpet clean is going to be a big pain in the you no what! Lol Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews, Scorpia! I always get so excited when I get reviews from people starting at the beginning or re-reading my stories because it's like a special gift! :) Thanks for the insights!
Author's Response: Hello! Yes, that does mean a new chapter is coming soon. :) I'm about 3/4 done with the next update...though judging by my boss's temperament this week, I probably won't be able to write the other 1/4 until the weekend. Either way, it's in the works - thanks for asking!
Author's Response: Don't die! Don't die! :) Thanks for the review. I hate that I've had to leave people hanging for so long, what with school & holidays, but please stay tuned for more updates! It makes me so happy to read reviews like this. ;)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! Author's Response: Hello A-zla! Wow - thank you for the compliment! Now that the holidays are over, I hope to help you out by having an alert for OME fairly soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I like writing the dream sequences...they're fun. :)
Author's Response: 2 months later... :) Thanks for the review! |
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