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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
Author's Response: Hello! I know it's been quite a while since your review, but I'm now getting back into the swing of things after the holidays and wanted to tell you how much appreciate your feedback! I'm so happy that you like so many elements of the story!
Thanks so much for updating! I can't tell you how great it is to see that you've written another chapter. I especially love the way that you write Harry's dreams. They are uniquely realistic and interesting. Can't wait to read more! Author's Response: No, musn't fail the tests! :) Sometimes I wish I had an "Inner Harry" to take them for me. *sigh*
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I am so happy that you found my story and liked it!
Author's Response: Yes, they do love to dance and fight, don't they? ;) Thanks for the review!
And you've got a spectacular plot, too! So basically, you're just too good to be true. You should have seen the embarrassing happy dance that I did when I saw you'd updated. No other stories make me happy dance! I could wax poetic about your manifold authorly virtues, but unfortunately, I have about a trillion applications to review tonight, plus two very unfortunate projects to complete. Thus, I will merely highlight the favorite points: The ending of the chapter is nummer eins: It just surpasses any and all fluffy Snape-Harry moments in its subtlety and Harry's realization that maybe he could trust Snape with his life. The twist: Harry's voluntary sacrifice. It is reminiscent of JKR's own plan for Harry, but you've already done more emotional exposition than she did. This was beautiful. Harry's future wife! 'Nuff said. I'm not a rabid shipper of anything, but just the idea of Harry having a future is so poignant after everything he's been through - and his incredulity that he'd have a family! It was painful and beautiful and almost tangible. Harry's impatience and Snape's exasperation made me snicker. A very realistic Occlumency lesson for them at this very tenuous point in their relationship. And basically every word you wrote. :) I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment! Happy writing! Author's Response: Yeah, so...your review officially = my ego booster. ;) I'm so happy that you like my characterizations! I've read enough HP fics to be quite annoyed when Harry comes off too brilliant or downtrodden, or when Snape sees one thing in Harry and turns unrealistically fluffy. I was worried that my desire to write them a little more realistically might make people might think it was moving too slowly, so I'm glad to hear that you like it!
Author's Response: Yes, ma'am! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for the review!
First---it's so wonderful to see an update! It made my day! There were so many good moments between Harry and Severus, Harry's synopsis of Severus' 'hypothesis' speech, trying to find a way to help Harry focus, Severus helping Harry to wake up, and calling him "Harry" only to have Harry refuse to believe it's him. While this vision was encouraging, it also is quite the challenge for Harry to hear that he has to surrender to Voldemort voluntarily. I guess this is the chance for Harry's Gryffindor courage to shine through. What a terrible burden, though. I hope Voldemort and Death Eaters won't torture him though. Poor kid has already suffered so much. And I love that it's touch that helps Harry Occlude--nice way to ensure that Severus has to be there at bedtime, huh? And I'd love, love, love a sequel once this one is done! Author's Response: I'm so glad I get reviews even when I don't ask nicely! But even so...I'll try to ask nicer in the future. ;) Thanks for the comments! I love that there were so many parts that you like. I can't wait to hear your comments on the next chapter!
wonderful chapter as always, I love your story! update soon! ^^ Author's Response: :) I'm glad you like the idea! I'm so worried that when it comes time, I may not have the time or energy to make a sequel, but we'll see. I may not be able to stop myself - I've already picked a title and written a scene. ;) Thanks for the review!
I love this fiction dearly. Your characterizations are beautiful and the style seems so cannon to me! And the plot line is brilliant!!! I can't find anything that I would change except that I still want more! I love it when Snape comes out with his protective side and you do such a wonderful job at it too... I eagerly await the next update! Keep up the amazing work! Author's Response: So is your name Madeline? Just curious... Thank you for the review! I am so happy that you are enjoying it. Yes, I love Snape's protective side, too...and with the way things are going, it could manifest itself quite a bit more in later chapters... ;)
“So, um…all that explaining was just to say that we should make a guess and see if it works.” “That is the general idea. My explanation was quite more precise, of course.” “Um, yeah. Of course.” harry's downright amusing, simplifying snape's length explanation like that. XD and thank goodness for snape not singing... although it would be hilarious (imagines snape going "hogwarts hogwarts hoggy warty hogwarts" and bursts out giggling) i'd shower you with cookies if i could! your story is one of the best i've read and i always eagerly anticiapte the next one. way to go, keeping me in agony. :P ps: i was rather worried that you ran into some trouble, like exams or something. life likes to come by and kick us in the... glad to know you're fine! Author's Response: Yay! Long review! :) Yes, you are correct that there was a bit of hysteria involved in Harry's laughter. A combination of the emotions from the visions and the awkwardness & humor of the Snape situation was a tad bit overwhelming for him. Good reading! :) P.S. I would accept your shower of cookies if I could. |
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