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Title: Chapter 15 - An Experiment in Civility 17 Aug 2007 11:50 pm
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    Mint chocolate (for variety's sake) to the author of this wonderful story! I don't have a ton of comments to make, but I do like this game between Severus and Harry about questions. I do believe it's used rather uniquely in this story. Keep up the great work!

    Author's Response:

    Yum...mint. I think that's my first. Gosh, do you know I've gotten quite the sweet tooth ever since I started asking for candies and actually got them in return? ;)

    Thank you for the review!

Title: Chapter 15 - An Experiment in Civility 17 Aug 2007 10:33 pm
Reviewer: Shellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Its the mark of an excellent author when you read really long chapters and find yourself hanging waiting for the next. Its also the mark of very annoying authors to give us really long chapters that leave us with even more questions! :p I await the next chapter and hope its SOON. I don't normally review but I am hoping enough will entice you to give us the next part quickly.

    Author's Response:

    Aw!  Did you call me excellent and annoying in the same review?  At least you said the excellent one first to soften me up!  LOL! :)

    I have potentially a lot to get into the next chapter, so it may be one of my longest yet.  Which is excellent for you because you get a long chapter, but is annoying for you because it might take me a little longer to post.  Anyway, I'll get to it now I know you're waiting on it!!!

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 15 - An Experiment in Civility 17 Aug 2007 8:49 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I. Love. This. Story. The question-for-a-question game they play is so brilliant. I loved it in the earlier chapter and I thought it was even better in this one. I wasn't expecting Snape to ask about the polyjuice potion, but of course he'd ask something like that, because well...he's Snape. lol. I think my favorite part was definitely when Snape finally answered Harry's question about Legilimency being more difficult to learn than Occlumency. I love how he acts so indifferent towards Harry, but finally gives in and answers his question...you know he's just dying to teach him Occlumency...if Harry would be willing to learn...and keep his mouth shut. lol. Hmmm...maybe he will... Will he?!

    Excellent job with this chapter and the whole story in general. I'm enjoying it so much and can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response:

    I. Love. Your. Review. ;)  It's so nice to hear all the specific things you liked!  Yeah, I liked that he answered Harry's question, too.

    Hmm...the question: Will Snape teach Harry Occlumency?  Well...Dumbledore essentially left the decision up to Snape, and Snape is still refusing, which is why Dumbledore is taking over.  The only way our two favorite characters would join up for those infamous lessons again is if Snape changed his mind.  So...will he?  You know I can't answer that!  ;)

Title: Chapter 15 - An Experiment in Civility 17 Aug 2007 8:37 pm
Reviewer: knysliukas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have just come over your story - it's fantastic! Thank you for the pleasure! :) I hope you are going to update soon... please do :)
Title: Chapter 15 - An Experiment in Civility 17 Aug 2007 8:36 pm
Reviewer: knysliukas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have just come over your story - it's fantastic! Thank you for the pleasure! :) I hope you are going to update soon... please do :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!  I hope you continue reading and enjoying!
Title: Chapter 15 - An Experiment in Civility 17 Aug 2007 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry almost sniggered, but he managed to keep his silence. All he needed was for Snape to exercise his Mastery at Insulting Harry Potter. That was perhaps his best mastery of all.

    hahah! GREAT line!

    I LOVE that Harry is curious about how snape learned Occlumency. I LOVE how he's doing that question thing with him again. XD So fun!

    And I LOVE that Snape's mother was an Occlumens and he learned it when he was young. When people learn stuff like that, they tend to think it easy, and think everyone else should know it already too. That's the perfect explanation for how he treats Harry over it, and did in the books. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review, Jan!

    I'm glad you liked that part about Snape's mother.  The point you brought up about Snape learning it so young and therefore thinking Harry should just "get it" is right on!  I don't think he ever really thought about that...but maybe he will...?

Title: Chapter 15 - An Experiment in Civility 17 Aug 2007 9:32 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape sure caught Harry off guard with the Polyjuice question. Someones busted now! Great chapter and hopefully more soon!

    Mmm Caramel sounds good after reading the chapter end notes. Must find caramel...

    Author's Response: Hehe, glad I gave you a food craving. :)  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 14 - Occlumency Tutor Wanted 15 Aug 2007 12:57 pm
Reviewer: Bek78 (Signed) [Report This]
    Please accept this chocolate...

    wonderful chapter. Update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    I accept your chocolate...yum!

    Thanks for the review!  Stay tuned. Coming up: lots of Snape & Harry interaction! :)

Title: Chapter 14 - Occlumency Tutor Wanted 15 Aug 2007 6:49 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi, new reader here. I'm really enjoying your story.

    It's nice to see Snape beginning to mellow a little and how he has compassion for Harry although he can't bring himself to show it (except when Harry's pretty much out of it). I can't wait for them to grow closer but I know that it can't be rushed. There's a long history of mutual animosity between them and it's not easy to let that go. Still, they're taking small steps towards a better relationship, and that's great for both of them. I think they could really be a strength and comfort to one another, once they learn to get along.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    A new reader! I love those! :)  Thank you for reading it all the way through. Good insight!

Title: Chapter 14 - Occlumency Tutor Wanted 14 Aug 2007 4:41 am
Reviewer: Branwyn (Signed) [Report This]
    OH MAN IT'S LIKE KARMA. I update my story, and boom, you've updated yours. And a sweet reward it is. It's so much fun watching Snape pretend not to care.

    Author's Response:

    Yay!  I hadn't realized your story had been updated!  I read it at the beginning, but I haven't gotten alerts...hmm, I'll have to check my favorites.  I could've sworn it was there...  Anyway, I'll have to go catch up on your story when I get home (and yes, leave reviews, because I know how fun it is to get them).

    Thanks for liking my story! Yes, that Snape - when will he ever just get in touch with his touchy-feely side?!


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