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Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 08 Aug 2007 12:19 am
Reviewer: belle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hehe...the belle is continuing her little reviewing mission! besides, she is shamelessly addicted to her review responses. *nods* they make her feel very happy.

    ooo...pufferfish anatomy! must be fascinating to study that firsthand, huh Harry?!

    i swear, i love reading some of the stuff snape comes up with! it's brilliant!

    i thought the whole ministry cover-up of azkaban was very realistic for canon-iness...i can just imagine them scurrying about in their little offices and weaving up a little story to publish!

    ha, and yes, i caught that, "yes, ron, you can have my broomstick if...you know..."

    trust our favorite wheezy to be the epitome of tact!

    the part where snape stopped before saying spoiled was kinda sweet, actually.

    ugh, sweet isn't the right word!

    well i don't know, but it made my heart get all swelly and look proudly at snape and harry and want to give them a gold medal for achievements of mankind.

    there, my descriptions of emotion have improved dramatically, haven't they?

    Author's Response:

    It's the belle! Yay! I'm glad I get to be a little part of making you happy, as you are a huge part of making me happy!

    Let me just say: I'm glad I've never met a pufferfish. I think Snape is a brilliant guy (and I'm glad - I'd never be able to write him if he didn't tell me what he wants to say). That ministry - sheesh - will they ever grow up? And I love Ron's lack of tact, don't you? :)

    Yes, your descriptions of emotion are excellent - I actually swelled a little right alongside you at hearing it put like that.  Though I wouldn't tell Snape he's "sweet" quite yet.  He might have you for dinner.

Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 07 Aug 2007 9:51 am
Reviewer: Branwyn (Signed) [Report This]
    :-) Updates from you never fail to make my day better. Your Snape is made of awesomesauce.

    Author's Response: Yummy!  You actually make him sound edibly delicious. ;)  Thank you for the nice review!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 07 Aug 2007 6:19 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm glad Harry got to see his friends in person rather than always owling them. Is Snape going to make him cut up potions ingredients for the rest of the summer or something?

    Author's Response: If Snape had his way (and if it were legal), I think instead of having Harry cut up potions ingredients all summer, he might use Harry as a main ingredient.  But that's just my impression... ;)  Maybe he'll come around...or maybe not...  Keep posted!  And thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 07 Aug 2007 4:04 am
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yea! Another brilliant chapter!! More soon PLEASE!!

    Author's Response: Wow, how can I resist a please like that? ;)  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 07 Aug 2007 12:34 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent! Excellent! I've finally caught up with my reading! Terrific chapter! So much happened! I thought that Harry's interaction between Ron and Hermione was spot on! I'm really happy that Harry told them about the prophecy! Now that Harry hasn't got all of the O.W.L's that he needs in order to continue on, I wonder what he is going to do. Perhaps Snape will ask Harry what he got on his O.W.Ls or Harry will ask Snape for some leeway. Well anyway, I can't wait to find out what happens next! I really hope that you will update very soon.

    Author's Response:

    Oh no...I'm so sad that you're caught up.  I was having a lot of fun reading your reviews. :(  I guess I'll just have to get moving on finishing the next chapter so I can read more!!!

Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 07 Aug 2007 12:29 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was totally like Snape! Trust Snape to make Harry forget about the dream he had by making him disembowel toads. Aww..maybe Snape really does care for Harry! I'm just kidding. It's probably waaay to early in the story for something like that to happen yet! However, I thought it was nice (again, gasp!) that instead of just telling Harry to go to bed, he gave him something to do to take his mind off of things. The scene with Dobby was perfect! Ha ha! Harry should know better by now that it is never a good idea to offer Dobby a chair, or the opportunity to sit down (Chamber of Secrets!). I wonder if Snape will eventually begin to tutor Harry in Potions or something. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Thanks for making my day a little more interesting with your wonderful story!

    Author's Response: Better not tell Snape you think he's a nice guy...he might make YOU disembowel toads! :)  Thanks for another wonderful review!
Title: Chapter 11 - Behind Closed Doors 07 Aug 2007 12:22 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Well the truth came out. Poor Harry. I wonder how things will turn out with just Harry and Snape staying in the house. I felt sorry for Harry after Remus showed him the cake. Here he is getting out all of his anger and frustration of people hiding things from him, (and they often do)he screams at Lupin only to find out that he had made a cake for him. He probably felt like a total arse. Oh well. Well I can't wait any longer to find out what happens next...more reading!

    Author's Response: Hehe, this is fun to read one review after another.  It's like getting to sit down with you and watch your reactions after reading each chapter of the story!  And yes, that was not Harry's shining moment...poor stressed out Harry...
Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters 07 Aug 2007 12:03 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry...you always need to know what's going on, don't you? Of course I can't blame you, I'd probably be doing the exact same thing as you. lol. Another terrific chapter. I'm going to need to start thinking up more interesting compliments apart from amazing and great job! It seems as though Remus is very suspicious of Snape right now, I can't wait to see what will happen with that! I loved the interaction with Remus and Snape about being noble. Very creative! Well, usually in this case I would write something such as "update soon." However, I am behind on my reading so there are already other chapters for me to read! Yay! Ha ha. You have no idea how difficult it was for me to be able to write a review for this chapter, before diving into the next chapters. Well I believe that all authors/writers deserve to get credit where credit is due, so thus I had to review first. Thanks again for another great chapter! I'm off to find out what's happening next!

    Author's Response:

    'Amazing'...'good job'... those are good compliments in and of themselves, so I thank you for being such an awesome reviewer that you expounded even further!!  :)  Even though it was difficult for you, I thank you so much for caring enough to review after each chapter! 

Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 06 Aug 2007 8:31 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! Hope there can be some action in the next! Please update soon!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'll see what I can do about some more action in future chapters...  :)
Title: Chapter 13 - Harry's Wheezy 06 Aug 2007 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Man, Snape is ruthless...lol. Although, to be honest, I wouldn't expect him to be any other way. I like how you've kept Snape in character. Sometimes I read fics where Snape is way too coddling, way too soon, and it makes me a bit ill, really.

    Plus, I think you've made it clear that Harry really doesn't like people feeling sorry for him or treating him like a child, and Snape doesn't do either. I'm anxious, though, to see how Snape and Harry get along for the rest of the summer. It seems like Snape really understands Harry even if he's reluctant to admit it.

    I'm enjoying this story so much! You have a real talent for writing realistic dialogue. The exchange between Hermione, Ron, and Harry was spot-on. I loved it.

    Oh, and I really liked how you ended this chapter. It's nice to see Harry smile once and a while...he's such an angsty kid. lol.

    And one more thing...since I read this story straight through a week or two ago, I meant to comment about the early chapters, but forgot when I kind of lumped my review into one at the end of the last chapter. ANYWAY...I appreciate how you made the abuse Harry suffered from his uncle believable and not over-done. I've read fics where Harry is absolutely pummled by Uncle Vernon and left for death. I guess I'm just saying that this fic is awfully believable and I love it!!


    That said, I can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response:

    Hehe, I totally know what you mean with getting ill!  I think it's the amount of fics I've read that have annoyed me with a too-nice-too-fast-Snape that made me want to take his development so slow in my own fic...

    Thanks so much for the complimentary review! I love to read what you & others like (or don't) about this fic!  I'm so glad you're liking my writing style and that you think it realistic!  Thanks!!!


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