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Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 30 Jul 2007 9:08 am
Reviewer: validego (Signed) [Report This]
    Your story is great! I usually don't like abused Harry but this is good, not over done and on his death bed like some. And I love your Snape! That's the best part. He's so in character. The interaction between the characters is good and I've laughed a few times. And I have to say, my own faith in Snape aside, that in that last chapter, there was a moment where I was like, "OMG! Harry's a deadman." Awesome!

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you like it!  I tried to keep the abuse believable and not overdone...  And I'm so happy I was able to make you laugh a few times!  It's nice to get perspectives from people who aren't nose to nose with the story.   

    Thanks for reviewing! I hope you keep reading and enjoying it!

Title: Chapter 12 - Dead Smelly Toads 30 Jul 2007 9:03 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    A lovely chapter! Poor Harry had to spend most of the night disembowling frogs. That must have been a lovely task. I hope there's more soon cuz this is an excellent story!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, sometimes I'm really glad I never had potions as a subject in school...or Snape as a professor. *shudder* Poor Harry...

    Thanks for reviewing!!

Title: Chapter 11 - Behind Closed Doors 27 Jul 2007 2:19 am
Reviewer: Arwen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    its really good, please continue
Title: Chapter 11 - Behind Closed Doors 24 Jul 2007 9:54 am
Reviewer: Branwyn (Signed) [Report This]
    That was absolutely delicious. Can't wait for your next update. Enjoy DH!
Title: Chapter 11 - Behind Closed Doors 21 Jul 2007 3:07 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter. I like the Wall Watcher device which will let Harry listen in on some conversations. And of course, yippee that Snape will be in the same house. They still have a long way to go.
Title: Chapter 11 - Behind Closed Doors 20 Jul 2007 8:34 pm
Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter... Good Harry finally told Remus where those bruises came from...

    Well, can't wait to read harry potter 7 and then go back to reading more fics and the next chapter in this fic!

    Eagerly waiting for more Harry and Severus bonding!
Title: Chapter 11 - Behind Closed Doors 20 Jul 2007 5:23 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, Love this story. OH it is going to get tense Snape and Harry in the same house (chills)
Title: Chapter 11 - Behind Closed Doors 20 Jul 2007 5:14 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved the tension. Very realistic. Worth the wait.
Title: Chapter 11 - Behind Closed Doors 20 Jul 2007 4:16 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! Last few days have been pretty rough for Harry but now that he's finally away from the Dursley's, everything will be better. Just out of curiosity, how far do you plan to go with this story? Like into the school year and so on or just a summer fic?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!

    I planned this originally as a summer-only fic (didn't want to overwhelm myself - my first story and all), but as of now, I have an entire schoolyear plot mapped out in my head.  So in answer to your question, um...I don't really know yet.  :\  At the pace I'm going (11 chapters to tell what, 3 days?) and my determination to finish what I start, I don't want to overcommit myself.  Whichever way I ultimately decide to go, I promise to bring the story to a proper conclusion, hopefully to your satisfaction!

Title: Chapter 10 - Hostility, House-elves, and Headmasters 17 Jul 2007 9:50 am
Reviewer: Serena (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LOVE IT! MORE! MORE! MORE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

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