Argh!!! Harry!!! Why didn't you tell Lupin the truth, now he is going to assume that Snape was the one who injured you!!! Ha ha! That was my mini rant to a fictional character. lol. Another great chapter, as usual. I like the idea of the Order having more than one location, it makes them seem like a real defense group, rather than just some people that gather at a house and discuss the war. Great idea! I can't wait to see what will be happening next. Are they off to Hogwarts, Grimmauld Place, or somewhere new? I can't wait to find out! For all of our sakes, please update soon! Thanks!
Author's Response: Me too. I look at the Order as a real operation in fighting the war... Secret codes and signals and alternate meeting locations and such. Anyway, that will be my take on the Order in this story - glad you're liking it!
| Title: Chapter 9 - Layovers and Lies
| 10 Jun 2007 12:12 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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Poor, Harry. He must be dying from embarrassment, but Severus is right, he does need to tell someone what had happened...
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I can't wait for the next chapter either. ;)
Awe... I wanted more :(
Author's Response: I'll give you more, don't frown! I've just got to finish it first... Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 1 - Unexpected Visitor
| 09 Jun 2007 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous)
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I like this story a lot please dont give up on it like some other people do!I am giving this chapter a ten,I love long chapters!I can't wait to see what happens to Harry next!
Congrats on having your story feastured! :)
These last two chapters have been soooo good! I think the best so far! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Aw! You know, it's amazing when writing a story, I wait anxiously after posting every chapter to see how it will be recieved. So far there have mainly been sighs of relief coupled with squeals of glee... Like when I read "soooo" and know you mean it. hehe, thanks!
| Title: Chapter 9 - Layovers and Lies
| 09 Jun 2007 8:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Sisyphus (Signed)
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I'm absolutely loving this story! I'm so glad you were featured, for that's how I found this fic.
I love your characterizations of both Snape and Harry, very true-to-form. It's not often that we get such a realistic view of an abused Harry; he's still stubborn and willful, while being insecure and uncertain at the same time.
I can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you found the story, too. :) I'm really trying to keep everyone in character, so I appreciate you commenting on that!
| Title: Chapter 8 - Of Wizards and Muggles
| 08 Jun 2007 8:22 am
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| Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed)
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Terrific take on SNape rescues Harry from the Dursleys! Looking forward to more!
| Title: Chapter 8 - Of Wizards and Muggles
| 06 Jun 2007 10:35 pm
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| Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous)
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I love this story!!LOVE IT!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
| Title: Chapter 5 - The Walls Have Ears
| 06 Jun 2007 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous)
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I love cliffhangers!!.....Well only if I find out what happens next really soon ! LOL LOL thanks for the chapter!!
| Title: Chapter 4 - The Art of Interrogation
| 06 Jun 2007 9:36 pm
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| Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous)
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LOVED this chapter! thanks!
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