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Title: Chapter 8 - Of Wizards and Muggles 04 Jun 2007 8:54 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    A most excellent chapter!! I had been waiting to see the scene when the Dursleys meet Snape and it turned out excellent! I love this story and I really hope you can write more soon!

    Author's Response: Whew! This was one of those milestone chapters - you know as a writer it's coming, and you just hope you can pull it off. Thanks for loving it!
Title: Chapter 8 - Of Wizards and Muggles 04 Jun 2007 8:49 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I love your descriptions of the character's movements and actions. It makes it very easy to imagine. I loved the weed spell. A perfect thing to do to the Dursleys. I was surprised that Snape had Harry come with him. I can't wait to see what Dumbledore will have to say about that, or what Snape will have to say to Dumbledore about Harry's living conditions. Also, I hope that Snape mentions how smart it is for Harry to have the hidden space under the floorboard. Ok...lol. Well anyway, terrific job. This story is quickly becoming one of my favorites. As usual, I cannot wait for an update. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful comments! I love hearing specifics about what people like. I can't wait to see what happens next too. Writing is even more fun than I thought it would be! :)
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 01 Jun 2007 3:47 am
Reviewer: sarafyna (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! Just stumbled across it and I'm already addicted. I really like the interaction between Harry and Snape :D

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad you stumbled upon it! Please keep reading!

Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 30 May 2007 10:22 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I wasn't expecting anything like that to develop in this story. Excellent writing. You aren't taking the relationship with Snape too quickly, but we are seeing movement. And then the dream--and another prophecy. That's another big, intriguing plot twist. When I started reading this story, I thought it was just going to be a nice, enjoyable Snape-and-Harry-learn-to-get-along-after-being-locked-up-together story. I can see now that this is going to be a whole lot more.

    Author's Response:

    Yes! This story is about Snape & Harry, but it's about them within the context of the war. I'm going for actual plot. Hang on, it's building! Yay! I knew this story would be seen as another "Snape & Harry I-hate-you-oh-wait-I-love-you" fic. I'm sure people will still think of it that way for a while, but I'm hoping to win them over as the story continues. :)

    P.S. I hope you still see it as nice & enjoyable.

Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 30 May 2007 6:00 am
Reviewer: cootiepatootie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so interesting. I stumbled upon it on the recommendation of this site from a friend and by reading the "what's new" section. I look forward to the continuance of this story. I especially look forward to the content of Snapie-poo's letter to Dumbledore.

    ta,

    Cassie

    Author's Response: Hehe, I was just picturing them calling each other Snapie-poo & Dumble-doo. Better not let Snape catch you talking like that! hehe :)
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 29 May 2007 3:14 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    Eek! Awesome chapter!!

    Author's Response: Eek! You talk like me!
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 29 May 2007 1:02 pm
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMGushies the suspense! Cant wait to read more :D

    Author's Response: Can't wait to hear your comments as you read more! Really, I wish I could write as fast as people read!
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 29 May 2007 8:49 am
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic Chapter! I loved Snape in this chapter, it would be just like him to poke his abnormally large nose into Harry's business and ask about the presents. And so ungrateful with demanding Harry's food. lol. Loved it. Well anyway, I can't wait for an update. Great job again.

    Author's Response: Totally Snape. I hadn't planned on him stealing Harry's food, actually... He just kinda took over and did it. Very rude on his part, but I found it entertaining, albeit at Harry's expense.
Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 29 May 2007 8:46 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Surreal dream scene. It's nightmarish.

    Earlier, I really enjoyed Harry's birthday scene. The watch was touching. Fantastic job.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!!!

Title: Chapter 7 - Catching the Snitch 29 May 2007 8:03 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! The end said he screamed... could this really happen and Vernon wakes up after hearing it? I really hope you update again soon! This story is sooo good so far!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the "excellent!" I like words like that! :) Did he scream for real? Was it another part of his dream? Hmm... I'll try to update as soon as I can, I promise!

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