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Reviews For O Mine Enemy
Thank you so much for the heads up that it's ending soon. I'm very excited about your marvel fanfiction. And the potential for a sequel here. Will you post a link to where your marvel fic will be? Also I'm kind of hoping it's going to be a peter and Tony mentorship thing? But I mean I love your writing so I'm sure I'll enjoy it regardless. Glad your feeling better and I'm so sorry to hear you lost a friend. These times certainly aren't easy 😞
Thank you so much for the heads up that it's ending soon. I'm very excited about your marvel fanfiction. And the potential for a sequel here. Will you post a link to where your marvel fic will be? Also I'm kind of hoping it's going to be a peter and Tony mentorship thing? But I mean I love your writing so I'm sure I'll enjoy it regardless. Glad your feeling better and I'm so sorry to hear you lost a friend. These times certainly aren't easy 😞
I’m so sorry about your friend and that you’ve been sick. I’m glad you are feeling better. Author's Response: Yay for meddling Snape, haha! Thank you for the review and for the kind words. :)
I think I first read OME in 2018 (my huge Severitus/P&S phase) and I remember being absolutely crushed when I realized it was a WIP. I was going through some things in my own life and I remember reading and re-reading this fic as a sort of comfort story back then. Since then, I’ve taken a break from reading HP fanfic (although I was, for a month or so, obsessed with Merlin fanfic - I think you mentioned you were a fan of Merlin & Arthur in your fanfic.net profile?). I was bored (read: procrastinating) over Thanksgiving break and decided to browse Potions & Snitches just out of curiosity. I clicked on this fic & after a few minutes of reading, I realized exactly what fic this was. I read the entire fic so far in one go (probably not the best for my posture and sleep schedule) and was absolutely blown away! I’ve probably read thousands of fics and I know OME will always take its place in my heart as an absolute favorite. I think at this point I’m emotionally attached to the Snape & Harry of your fic! You write them so incredibly well. I remember part of what drew me to OME in the first place was how in-character Snape was -- a side of canon Snape once forced to open his mind a little. He wasn’t a complete monster and he wasn’t the perfect bubbly good-doer that a lot of fics tend to portray him as. I love how he develops from mean to stern & his relationship with Harry goes from hostile to neutral to something more. The dialogue is EVERYTHING. I honestly feel like parts of Harry & Snape’s early conversations could easily fit in canon; you write them so painfully well. I love the balance between angst & playful banter and I love how fluidly their relationship grows throughout the plot of the story. The Harry & Snape of Chapter 56 could not compare to the Harry & Snape of Chapter 1, but while reading the fic, the transition and growth in their relationship is completely seamless. You’re also just such an incredible author, the description and the plot and the writing style of OME is just… *chef’s kiss*. I honestly could just go on and on talking about this fic, but for the sake of not being too annoying, I’ll just thank you for being the best. Reading this has just been such a mixture of nostalgia, excitement, & love. I was just curious if you’re on any other sort of social media platform? I’d love to follow your work & writing! Also: if you are ever in need of a beta/editor… let’s just say I’d be extremely happy to help out whenever! Author's Response: Thank you so so much for the long review! I totally want to unintelligibly gush/cry about how nice it is to hear how much you're enjoying OME! :) :) To hear that it's on your absolute favorites list? Aw, be still mine heart! I'm grinning so much! So I tried really hard to make their relationship grow organically. In fact, a big part of why I got overwhelmed and abandoned this fic for so many years was that I didn't want to move them faster than seemed natural, and then when I realized how loooong this story was going to have to be to accomodate that, it seemed so daunting. So my brain fizzled and it stopped. But it never left me alone, so here I am, back at it and almost finished! Yay!! I LOVE Merlin! I've actually outlined a Merlin fanfic that I'd love to write, a semi-time-travel fix-it for season 5. I wish we'd gotten to see them work together with Arthur in the know during the series. So just like I wanted to see Harry and Snape get along, which led to OME, it's one of those things that might not leave me alone until I write a Merlin fanfic of my own. ;) Lots of amusing Arthur-discovering-things-aren't-how-he-always-thought moments or awww actually-appreciating-Merlin moments ready to be written...not to mention integrating Gwen and the knights. Anyway, if you have any favorite non-slash Merlin fics to recommend, please feel free to share. :) Thanks for the beta/editor offer - I'll definitely keep it in mind. ;) I'm not on any social media platform. I've considered building a writing page on some one or other platform, but I'm at a loss as to where and how I should go about it. Any ideas?
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I appreciate your kindness, and also your enthusiasm for OME. It makes my heart happy. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so so glad you like it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! Teehee I love that heart attack signal myself. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!!
“A hug,” said Snape stiffly. “They...provide comfort. I loved this so much. It sounds like something Snape would say. Plus, it me made laugh when I read it. 💕 😄 |
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