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Title: Flying Lessons 25 Jan 2022 7:21 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    So glad that some things stayed the same!
Title: Flying Lessons 07 Dec 2007 9:58 am
Reviewer: supergirl_3684 (Signed) [Report This]
    "“I hope I don’t regret that decision…” Severus muttered as he slumped down in the chair." something tells me he just might!

    Author's Response:

    Oh course he will! Flying isn't exactly the worlds safest thing to do. :)

Title: Flying Lessons 15 Oct 2007 2:19 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What an exciting flying lesson! I'm glad Alec caught Lisa in time! And who could his enemy be? Just another student who doesn't like Snape, or worse?

    And Alec is on the Quidditch team! That should be fun!

    Author's Response: You'll find out just who dislikes Alec soon enough...
Title: Flying Lessons 13 Jul 2007 10:04 pm
Reviewer: Arcana_Mortalitas (Signed) [Report This]
    I had to cover my eyes when he told his friends to go ahead. It's just setting yourself up for desaster. Great story so far.

    Author's Response: Thanks for another review!
Title: Flying Lessons 16 Jun 2007 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    One of the things that I've enjoyed about your story is seeing how differently things could have been for Harry and yet, there are still certain things that haven't changed. He was sorted into Ravenclaw, yet is obviously still destined to play Seeker.
    Love it!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: I really really appreciate that you took the time to review for all of my chapters! Its reading comments like those that encourage me to write more since I know some people enjoy reading my story! I hope you enjoy the next chapter, which shall be posted now! :)
Title: Flying Lessons 05 Jun 2007 10:41 am
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    That's good indeed! Lisa is just like Hermione, isn't she? And JJ is like Ron? So the trio system remains... That's good. I like it!

    Author's Response: Yup! It's pretty much my version of the trio, only in Ravenclaw. Thanks for the review!
Title: Flying Lessons 03 Jun 2007 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Howl (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story. Character development is going well and the two new OCs are well developed. Your only problem is dialogue. WAY too clean. Sentences are long, perfectly constructed, and, well, too perfect. Write dialogue like you would speak.

    Think about it. When you talk to your friends, do you use complete, perfect sentences? You cut words off, combine words, like 'couldn't've' or 'wouldn't've', and you use slang. So does Potter universe.

    Anyway, good story so far. Can't wait to see where this goes.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the revirew! I never really thought about the slang and such but I will try to remember that in the future.
Title: Flying Lessons 03 Jun 2007 5:35 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    New chapter, yay! ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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