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Reviews For Never Normal
Thank goodness Alex is there to help protect Harry. And the bit about his daughter Lisa is interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: Severus is a smart man and he'll realize something is at least slightly suspicious around that household. Don't forget about Lisa becuase she just might show up later...
I can't help but feel a teeny bit sorry for Dudley (Harder to feel anything but contempt for Petunia here). But Dudley is just a kid, too, and although I'd love to have him to myself for a few weeks, and get his bullying ways out of him, it's not really his fault that his parents are idiots who have ruined him. And he would have to be pretty scared being kidnapped like that. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Surprisingly enough, I feel bacd for Dudley as well since his parents spoil him so much that it really wont help him later on in life. As you read on, you'll discover breifly that things will change dramatically in Dudley's living arrangements...
Author's Response: I too find it hard to believe Vernon would ever pay to get his nephew. But he isn't giving the money back in exchange for Harry, he just wants his wife and son back.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! In case you haven't checked it out yet, the sequel has already been posted!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! In case you haven't checked it out yet, the sequel has already been posted!
Author's Response: The name is revealed in the final chapter of Never Normal, which is finally out along with the start of the sequel. Thanks very much for the review!
>>>“Let me out of here! I want my mum!” Dudley began demanding. “I’m hungry! Get me some food!” Dudley continued demanding various things from the kidnappers, who were not about to cater to his demands.>“I demand to see my son at once!!” She was in no position to demand anything but yet she demanded anyway.>“Thank you.” Harry whispered. This man may have kidnapped him, but he gave Harry an ice pack for his hand and that was something that his relatives have never done for him before. Author's Response: My beta pointed out the exact same thing so I have been working on that. Thanks for the helpful review!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review all my chapters! It makes me soo happy I might have to go update now...
Author's Response: Glad you liked his bit of revenge! |
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