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Reviews For Never Normal
Title: Fruit Loops 28 Sep 2007 6:06 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the interaction with the characters, especially Vernon and Severus. I wonder if Severus will believe Vernon's lies about why Harry wasn't in the pictures or pick up on the fact that Vernon only asked about Petunia and Dudley when he first saw Severus.

    Thank goodness Alex is there to help protect Harry. And the bit about his daughter Lisa is interesting.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Severus is a smart man and he'll realize something is at least slightly suspicious around that household. Don't forget about Lisa becuase she just might show up later...
Title: Unlocking Doors 23 Sep 2007 11:11 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, maybe the kidnappers aren't so bad after all. They are nicer to Harry than the Dursleys, although that's not saying much, is it?

    I can't help but feel a teeny bit sorry for Dudley (Harder to feel anything but contempt for Petunia here). But Dudley is just a kid, too, and although I'd love to have him to myself for a few weeks, and get his bullying ways out of him, it's not really his fault that his parents are idiots who have ruined him. And he would have to be pretty scared being kidnapped like that.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Surprisingly enough, I feel bacd for Dudley as well since his parents spoil him so much that it really wont help him later on in life. As you read on, you'll discover breifly that things will change dramatically in Dudley's living arrangements...
Title: Money, Money, Money 23 Sep 2007 11:06 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! Sounds like some real meanies have Petunia, Dudley, and Harry. I have to admit, I find it hard to picture Vernon parting with money just to get Harry returned, but I hope they'll be all right!

    Author's Response: I too find it hard to believe Vernon would ever pay to get his nephew. But he isn't giving the money back in exchange for Harry, he just wants his wife and son back.
Title: A Rat, A Panther, and A Wolf 10 Sep 2007 8:21 pm
Reviewer: TrustSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. This was a sweet father/son story. Thank you for sharing it.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review! In case you haven't checked it out yet, the sequel has already been posted!
Title: A Rat, A Panther, and A Wolf 09 Sep 2007 3:25 pm
Reviewer: honore (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, I loved it. No, I adored it., No it was wonderful. Thanks so much

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! In case you haven't checked it out yet, the sequel has already been posted!
Title: The Cat 22 Aug 2007 1:59 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    awww Severus has a buddy now they do seem to have the same deposition. Curious to see what he decides to name it, and what is to come, keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    The name is revealed in the final chapter of Never Normal, which is finally out along with the start of the sequel. Thanks very much for the review!

Title: Unlocking Doors 16 Jul 2007 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Ah, yes, Anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's so nice to find a new concept and I like this one so far. You seem to be explaining too much though. Examples:

    >>>“Let me out of here! I want my mum!” Dudley began demanding. “I’m hungry! Get me some food!” Dudley continued demanding various things from the kidnappers, who were not about to cater to his demands.>“I demand to see my son at once!!” She was in no position to demand anything but yet she demanded anyway.>“Thank you.” Harry whispered. This man may have kidnapped him, but he gave Harry an ice pack for his hand and that was something that his relatives have never done for him before.

    Author's Response: My beta pointed out the exact same thing so I have been working on that. Thanks for the helpful review!
Title: Christmas Part 2 15 Jul 2007 12:46 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Title: Christmas 13 Jul 2007 11:38 pm
Reviewer: Arcana_Mortalitas (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwwwwww. That was so cute. Severus is such a good father. Draco's a snob. I don't like him. Or those other Ravenclaws. Or Higgs. Or Black. This is a good thing, if I have any feelings at all over a fic it means it was very well written as I don't often feel anything when reading fics. Thank you for taking the time to write this. I'll wait impatiently for the next update. Mabe I should calm down now.... hehe. Mozart, here I come!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review all my chapters! It makes me soo happy I might have to go update now...
Title: The Trial of Sirius Black 13 Jul 2007 11:21 pm
Reviewer: Arcana_Mortalitas (Signed) [Report This]
    HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Harry has a Slytherin prankster side after all!! wonderfully written.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked his bit of revenge!

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