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Title: Rescued! 15 Jun 2007 5:39 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    I'd say finding Harry in that condition removed any lingering doubts Severus may have had as to how the boy was being treated by his relatives. That and Harry's response to him when he'd been startled was that of a child who had been abused for years.

    Although Snape may "hate" children, I don't think Dumbledore had to work too hard to convince him to take care of this poor little guy!

    Now, sadly, much as I'd like to stay up all night and read the rest of this story, I MUST go to bed! You've kept me up long enough! LOL!

    Great story hon!
    Tracy

    Author's Response:

    Severus will learn to love all children when pigs fly and for now, Harry will be the only exception.

     I forgot.... In the magical world pigs probably could fly....?

Title: Wizards, Witches and Toads 15 Jun 2007 5:27 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yes, Snape is the man you want around when a kidnapping goes wrong! Too bad Vernon was too much of an ass to appreciate that fact! Oh and turning Jason into a toad was perfect! LOL!

    Now poor Severus KNOWS things are not as they should be and what is more, Dumbledore keeps pulling the "Lily" card on him so he can't just turn his back on the situation.

    Great stuff hon. Actually, since I should have gone to bed a while ago, I'm not sure that that is a good thing! 1 more chapter and that's it! I will have self control! This would be easier if your story weren't so good! I hope you feel guilty of robbing me of my sleep! LOL!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: I throw my self control out the window all the time when I start reading a great fic. :)
Title: Fruit Loops 15 Jun 2007 5:14 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    I was wondering if Vernon would push his luck with Snape or not. Looks like he has a hint of self preservation after all! Not that Snape couldn't glare most people into compliance! LOL!

    Sounds like Alex may have a little witch on his hands! Boy will he be in for a surprise when he get a letter from Hogwarts! LOL! So not only is he a father, but his own child has some odd little talents too! Small wonder he is sympathetic to Harry. That and it is obvious that Harry has been abused.

    Another great chapter hon and although I REALLY should be getting to bed, I am just going to have to read another!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: You might be onto something about Alex's daughter... :)
Title: Unlocking Doors 15 Jun 2007 5:04 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    You know you are an abused child when:
    a) Your kidnappers feed you and your relatives don't.

    b) Your kidnappers see to the injuries that were inflicted on you BY your relatives and your relatives don't.

    c) Your kidnappers of less than 24 hours show you more concern and compassion than your relatives have shown for you your whole life!

    d) All of the above!

    I'd say the answer is d and that it is a bit of an understatement to say that that does NOT reflect positively on the Dursleys!

    Great chapter hon and now, instead of going to bed, I'm going to have to read another!

    Tracy

    Author's Response: I'd agree with D and I always figured the Dursley's were harsh even in the books but JKR probably didn't want to write all the details.
Title: Money, Money, Money 15 Jun 2007 4:48 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Now talk about your completely original stories! Wow, good one hon! I was going to head off to bed, but I'm compelled to read the next chapter to see what happens!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Flying Lessons 05 Jun 2007 10:41 am
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    That's good indeed! Lisa is just like Hermione, isn't she? And JJ is like Ron? So the trio system remains... That's good. I like it!

    Author's Response: Yup! It's pretty much my version of the trio, only in Ravenclaw. Thanks for the review!
Title: Flying Lessons 03 Jun 2007 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Howl (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story. Character development is going well and the two new OCs are well developed. Your only problem is dialogue. WAY too clean. Sentences are long, perfectly constructed, and, well, too perfect. Write dialogue like you would speak.

    Think about it. When you talk to your friends, do you use complete, perfect sentences? You cut words off, combine words, like 'couldn't've' or 'wouldn't've', and you use slang. So does Potter universe.

    Anyway, good story so far. Can't wait to see where this goes.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the revirew! I never really thought about the slang and such but I will try to remember that in the future.
Title: Flying Lessons 03 Jun 2007 5:35 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    New chapter, yay! ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Sorting 23 May 2007 2:31 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Title: Sorting 23 May 2007 1:50 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    ^^ I want to hug it. Y'know, I think I will. -Huggles-
    Is ther going to be more Alec/Sev interaction next chapter? And perhaps something that makes one want to say 'Awwe! How cute!'

    Author's Response: There is more Alec/Sev interaction in the next chapter. Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

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