I love it
is snape going to find out that Shaun Petersen is harry potter or is he going to stay in the dark for awhile
I love this story! I'll be anxiously awaiting updates, for sure. You not only have a good idea but you write well. Unfortunately that's an all too uncommon combination. Write quickly, this could be fun!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 12 May 2007 9:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Laura (Anonymous)
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Oooh, this is nice. Do they actually start a relationship somewhere in here? ;)
| Title: Chapter 3
| 09 May 2007 12:18 am
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| Reviewer: MorwenIsilwen (Anonymous)
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Ooooooh! Keep going! This is great!
I love the way you are portraying 'Shaun' (which by the way is a great name for him), although Severus seems a little too patient...having to choose maybe?
Excellent chapter! Please update again soon!
Whooo! Great chapter. :) I liked the dynamic you have with the other boys around, but I wish that you would do more with them. They will only be around for a short time, if my guess is correct. :) I liked the haircut scene and idea. I was a little surprised that Snape just took the scars explanation at face value and didn't seem curious about them. But maybe he just doesn't care. *sigh*
Thanks for sharing!
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