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Reviews For Emotional Commotion
Author's Response: oh you'll just have to see when that happens.
XD Story about a story. Thats /exactly/ how I explain fanfictions whenever anyone asks! Author's Response: It IS so hard to explain fanfic, eh! Goodness!
Author's Response: ooh not good. i have a friend who doesn't react well to it either. personally... i love the stuff. only thing for my migraines sometimes.
Author's Response: I'm thinking that I might take you up on that offer once I get a new computer and would have access to my e-mail account so that I could actually send chapters. *sigh* old computers are so frustrating. Thanks for your review. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story.
Author's Response: ohhh... *hugs* no more tears!... well, unless I write something terribly emotional. I'm glad that you feel better now.
Author's Response: poor guilt-ridden harry. hehe. Thanks!
Author's Response: I did think that was funny too. Thanks!
I loved this: "It wouldn’t make Harry drowsy so much as it would… make him higher than a muggle kite." LOL! Oh poor Harry. I liked Snape's observations a lot. I did notice some typos: "...he looked up from the book to see Professor Snape sitting in one of the armchairs with a book of his on." own. "'Harry nodded and hurried out to put it away. In his room, he set them on his nightstand..." it on his nightstand "“Oh” Harry nodded. He waited until Snape started eating before he dug in. His potions were small..." portions "Roasted chicken and vegetables, cottage cheese, and a bread roll." Might want to add "were on is plate" "Has full as the day had been..." As "His awareness showed with his embarrassed silence the faint redness that showed on his neck and face whenever he remembered something he’d done the other two days." This is hard to understand. I think that that was it! Fantastic chapter. :D I want to see Harry fly! Will Snape fly with him? I liked how Snape gave Harry the book his mum loved. That was so sweet. Thanks for posting! Author's Response: Wonderful review. I brought up a new window so I could make the edits that you had pointed out. As for Camelot... er.... let's say that Aunt Petunia had a mild crush on Richard Harris and listened to the soundtrack alot... on full blast so that the whole family had to hear. *L*
Author's Response: thank you very much!
Author's Response: Ah... Snape will confirm it one way or the other when Harry is aware of the truth and Snape and he have a talk. Hmmm.... maybe they COULD watch Star Wars..... I think you might have given me an idea for something later on. Good on you. |
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