Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Ephesians 4:26 05 Jul 2007 12:12 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I hope Snape's not too angry. I wonder when Snape will tell Harry about his real parents.

    Author's Response: oh you'll just have to see when that happens.
Title: Ephesians 4:26 03 Jul 2007 4:18 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    "Hmm… maybe not a book. More like a story about a story."
    XD
    Story about a story. Thats /exactly/ how I explain fanfictions whenever anyone asks!

    Author's Response: It IS so hard to explain fanfic, eh! Goodness!
Title: Ephesians 4:26 02 Jul 2007 11:30 pm
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    O goodness, with vicodin, I just hit the bathroom and hard, I will not be taking that stuff again! I had facial nerve pain due to a virus reactivating (along with left-side facial paralysis), but I'll take the pain any day over vicodin.

    Author's Response:

    ooh not good. i have a friend who doesn't react well to it either. personally... i love the stuff. only thing for my migraines sometimes.

Title: Ephesians 4:26 08 Jun 2007 1:05 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant story! I'm really enjoying this - your characterizations are spot on. Don't see much in the way of errors, but if you need a beta, I'm available anytime you need assistance. Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    I'm thinking that I might take you up on that offer once I get a new computer and would have access to my e-mail account so that I could actually send chapters. *sigh* old computers are so frustrating.

    Thanks for your review. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story.

Title: Ephesians 4:26 27 May 2007 9:13 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    thank you... i was crying earlier... but you helped with Drugged-Up Harry .. thank you so much!

    Author's Response:

    ohhh... *hugs* no more tears!... well, unless I write something terribly emotional.

    I'm glad that you feel better now.

Title: Ephesians 4:26 25 May 2007 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw ... Great job Severus to put up with the attitude when we all know how much he hates it. Harry, appologized but I'll bet he still feels guilty. Look forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: poor guilt-ridden harry. hehe. Thanks!
Title: Ephesians 4:26 25 May 2007 8:55 am
Reviewer: Gillianne (Signed) [Report This]
    The head marshmallow line was the best...ever! :)

    Author's Response: I did think that was funny too. Thanks!
Title: Ephesians 4:26 25 May 2007 5:54 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    GREAT ending! Really. Best cutoff I've read in awhile. I liked the potions. Funny effects, but where would Harry have learned the whole soundtrack to Camelot? XD LOL.

    I loved this: "It wouldn’t make Harry drowsy so much as it would… make him higher than a muggle kite." LOL! Oh poor Harry. I liked Snape's observations a lot.

    I did notice some typos:

    "...he looked up from the book to see Professor Snape sitting in one of the armchairs with a book of his on."
    own.

    "'Harry nodded and hurried out to put it away. In his room, he set them on his nightstand..." it on his nightstand

    "“Oh” Harry nodded. He waited until Snape started eating before he dug in. His potions were small..." portions

    "Roasted chicken and vegetables, cottage cheese, and a bread roll." Might want to add "were on is plate"

    "Has full as the day had been..." As

    "His awareness showed with his embarrassed silence the faint redness that showed on his neck and face whenever he remembered something he’d done the other two days." This is hard to understand.

    I think that that was it! Fantastic chapter. :D I want to see Harry fly! Will Snape fly with him? I liked how Snape gave Harry the book his mum loved. That was so sweet. Thanks for posting!

    Author's Response:

    Wonderful review. I brought up a new window so I could make the edits that you had pointed out.

    As for Camelot... er.... let's say that Aunt Petunia had a mild crush on Richard Harris and listened to the soundtrack alot... on full blast so that the whole family had to hear. *L*

Title: Ephesians 4:26 25 May 2007 1:14 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! :)

    Author's Response: thank you very much!
Title: Ephesians 4:26 24 May 2007 8:20 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    There were several fun portions of this chapter. I'm wondering if you are going to accept Snape as a half-blood as per canon, or whether he will be pureblooded. I'm getting clues both ways in this story. I hope the muggle kitchen will be further explained. And if they have electricity for appliances, they should be able to actually watch Star Wars at some point. ;-)

    Author's Response:

    Ah... Snape will confirm it one way or the other when Harry is aware of the truth and Snape and he have a talk. Hmmm.... maybe they COULD watch Star Wars..... I think you might have given me an idea for something later on. Good on you.


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