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Title: Ephesians 6:4 05 Jul 2007 12:35 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! This story is really good!

    Author's Response: thank you
Title: Ephesians 6:4 02 Jun 2007 10:02 pm
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    Am just jumping in when it comes to this story so will refrain from pointing out everything I loved, it's a great story you have here. Mostly I am really pleased the way you are handling Snape's character here - he is much more easier to get wrong than Harry, and you are keeping him nicely attuned to canon here - I like the reserved approach, and his desire to get to know Harry first, while trying to respect Harry's obvious issues. He is not too cold, but also not too emotional - in essence I love the way you are writing him. Harry as well, he seems to act his age, but also appropriately for the level of abuse he got from the Dursleys.

    You kept the believability and realism which are really important, and you gave this old theme a very interesting and original twist with the initial beginning which does give you a much larger playing field for the future plot.

    Thanks muchly, I will enjoy following it :)

    Author's Response:

    oh thank goodness.... you just induced a huge sigh of relief for me. i was very worried about my snape.... i didn't want him mean and i didn't want him showering harry with affections right away... but i was scared that i might have made him dull. actually i was scared that the whole story might be seeming dull.... it's just taking a while to get to the good stuff (which should start happening in two or three chapters actually).

    thank you so so much for your review and I'm very glad you are enjoying this story!

Title: Ephesians 6:4 01 Jun 2007 8:23 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    It's wonderful!!!

    Author's Response: yay thanks!
Title: Ephesians 6:4 01 Jun 2007 4:32 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter! I liked the ending when Snape agreed to help him. Keep up the great writing! :)

    Author's Response: thanks!
Title: Ephesians 6:4 31 May 2007 8:03 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! :) Nice chapter and great way to end it. I liked how Harry got up when Snape invaded his personal space and then Snape apologized for it, being all cool. That is much more realistic and in character than other options. The shed and discussion of Harry's chores was good. I like watching Snape struggle with connecting with his son, without actually telling him the truth. It's very interesting. Update when you can!

    Some typos:
    “You should have had to earn your keep... Chores are mostly mean to teach..." You should NOT have had... Chores are mostly meant to teach

    "Harry’d already denied being beaten and Severus figured there wee three possibilities here." were

    Author's Response:

    Thanks much! I shall try my ver hardest to update as soon as possible.

    Thanks for the typo pointers! I totally love that you can go back and fix things without having to upload the whole chapter all over again... I love this place.

Title: Ephesians 6:4 31 May 2007 3:58 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Harry was great and I like the slytherin vs slytherin thinking(not going to give anything away) talk about the chores that Harry used to do. Severus is perfect not taking everything at face value and not wanting to think the worst of him - just wonderful. Looking forward to the next update.

    Author's Response: thankies! I almost wrote myself into a corner with that one and had to rip the pages out of my notebook and write it all over again. I'm glad it finally turned out alright and that you like it.
Title: Ephesians 6:4 31 May 2007 10:39 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    That chapter was great, I loved how Severus and Harry compromised, and Sev told him upfront what he wouldn't do to him if he misbehaves, so very important for Harry. Loving your fatherly Severus BTW. Keep up the great work and please update soon. LES

    Author's Response: Thanks muchly!

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