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Reviews For Emotional Commotion
Author's Response: thank you
You kept the believability and realism which are really important, and you gave this old theme a very interesting and original twist with the initial beginning which does give you a much larger playing field for the future plot. Thanks muchly, I will enjoy following it :) Author's Response: oh thank goodness.... you just induced a huge sigh of relief for me. i was very worried about my snape.... i didn't want him mean and i didn't want him showering harry with affections right away... but i was scared that i might have made him dull. actually i was scared that the whole story might be seeming dull.... it's just taking a while to get to the good stuff (which should start happening in two or three chapters actually). thank you so so much for your review and I'm very glad you are enjoying this story!
Author's Response: yay thanks!
Author's Response: thanks!
Some typos: “You should have had to earn your keep... Chores are mostly mean to teach..." You should NOT have had... Chores are mostly meant to teach "Harry’d already denied being beaten and Severus figured there wee three possibilities here." were Author's Response: Thanks much! I shall try my ver hardest to update as soon as possible. Thanks for the typo pointers! I totally love that you can go back and fix things without having to upload the whole chapter all over again... I love this place.
Author's Response: thankies! I almost wrote myself into a corner with that one and had to rip the pages out of my notebook and write it all over again. I'm glad it finally turned out alright and that you like it.
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