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Title: Ecclesiastes 9:12 19 Jun 2007 10:52 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! :)

    Author's Response: thank you!
Title: Ecclesiastes 9:12 19 Jun 2007 8:51 pm
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story, I love it!

    Author's Response: thanks!
Title: Ecclesiastes 9:12 19 Jun 2007 5:20 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool story. hope you can update soon!

    Author's Response: but... i just DID update. Ah well... I'll probably have another update up by Sunday night or Monday morning. I'm glad you are enjoying the story!
Title: Ecclesiastes 9:12 19 Jun 2007 2:09 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Is it really dehydration or is he getting sick? Snape is getting very attached and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: both actually. what i'm getting him sick with usually takes longer than a mere day to actually get bad... so i dehydrated and weakened him a bit... figured it would speed up the process of getting sick... and it has the benefit of adding a little more drama because i've been bored with the past few chapters.
Title: Luke 15:24 17 Jun 2007 9:03 am
Reviewer: Nayeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow, such an original way for sevitus to happen, and even a creative way for severus to discover the truth.. i absolutely love it., keep writing, I urge you to keep writing Severitus stuff.. and can I bother you for help on my severitus fics?.. nayelitiaret13@yahoo.com ... please reply

    Author's Response: Eek, I don't really have easy access to an e-mail account right now due to my computer being a b*tch.... but as soon as I am able to get into it, I'll definately e-mail you. I'm not sure what kind of help you are looking for, but I'll help if I can.
Title: Matthew 6:31-33 16 Jun 2007 7:03 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I like how Snape knew about the Polyjuice potion from second year. Will this follow the outline of GoF with the tournament or do you have your own storyline planned?

    Author's Response: Some major things from GOF will stay... like the TriWizard Tournament, Voldie's return, Mad Eye Moody, etc. And some things will change... I really want Draco to come around. I'm thinking maybe when he sees that there is no way that Snape (the teacher he so looked up to) could a supporter or You Know Who because of Harry... or something like that. Plus... this time around, Harry will have an adult (aside from Sirius and Remus who are so absent in GOF) to look up to and seek advice from.
Title: Ephesians 4:26 08 Jun 2007 1:05 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant story! I'm really enjoying this - your characterizations are spot on. Don't see much in the way of errors, but if you need a beta, I'm available anytime you need assistance. Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    I'm thinking that I might take you up on that offer once I get a new computer and would have access to my e-mail account so that I could actually send chapters. *sigh* old computers are so frustrating.

    Thanks for your review. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story.

Title: Ephesians 6:4 02 Jun 2007 10:02 pm
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    Am just jumping in when it comes to this story so will refrain from pointing out everything I loved, it's a great story you have here. Mostly I am really pleased the way you are handling Snape's character here - he is much more easier to get wrong than Harry, and you are keeping him nicely attuned to canon here - I like the reserved approach, and his desire to get to know Harry first, while trying to respect Harry's obvious issues. He is not too cold, but also not too emotional - in essence I love the way you are writing him. Harry as well, he seems to act his age, but also appropriately for the level of abuse he got from the Dursleys.

    You kept the believability and realism which are really important, and you gave this old theme a very interesting and original twist with the initial beginning which does give you a much larger playing field for the future plot.

    Thanks muchly, I will enjoy following it :)

    Author's Response:

    oh thank goodness.... you just induced a huge sigh of relief for me. i was very worried about my snape.... i didn't want him mean and i didn't want him showering harry with affections right away... but i was scared that i might have made him dull. actually i was scared that the whole story might be seeming dull.... it's just taking a while to get to the good stuff (which should start happening in two or three chapters actually).

    thank you so so much for your review and I'm very glad you are enjoying this story!

Title: Ephesians 6:4 01 Jun 2007 8:23 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    It's wonderful!!!

    Author's Response: yay thanks!
Title: Ephesians 6:4 01 Jun 2007 4:32 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter! I liked the ending when Snape agreed to help him. Keep up the great writing! :)

    Author's Response: thanks!

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