| Title: Chapter 25: Childhood with a Side of Torture
| 31 Jan 2013 4:44 am
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| Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
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i love this story but i just don't see how harry can just shrug off the betrayal of severus and albus....or any of the adults really. they all knew and didn't care what they were condemning harry to. your harry is a better person that i'll ever be. i just don't see how a father/son relationship could ever form. perhaps friends or comrades but parental was forever lost when snape gave up his son. oh, and for snape to try and claim "his son" now is just....arrgh. it makes be bristle every time i read it. harry is an adult and doesn't have to answer to any of his housemates and to where he is going and what he is doing. if he wants to share, great but none of them have any claim on him. none of them have earned any respect from harry.
ok, rant over. you are a very good writer to elicit such an emotional response to your story. Well done!!! :-)
Author's Response: I fully agree! It's just one of those things when you are following a Challenge and filling all the requirements, and then also following were your Muse takes you at the same time.
Thank you for the review!