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Title: Chapter 1: The Summer Begins 08 Jan 2009 9:15 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    This is pretty good so far, though I have a very hard time believing that the Dursley's would actually allow someone to stay over as Harry's guest. Good start to the fic!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, I hope you enjoy the rest as well. I started this before book 7 came out, and now, I too, have a hard time seeing them allowing anyone staying with Harry. But, I was convinced at the end of book 6 that Hermione and Ron weren't going to let Harry go anywhere alone. Oh well, that's what the AU category is for. :D Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 1: The Summer Begins 29 Dec 2008 5:13 am
Reviewer: utahtoken1 (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a great story ecept i kkhate the clifhanger can't wait to get an update please email me thanks

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope you've already gotten the updates.
Title: Chapter Thirty: To live again...and again...and... 21 Dec 2008 4:05 pm
Reviewer: Devilishlycute (Signed) [Report This]
    i love your story and enjoy reading it immensely. This chapter was great. My favourite line in the chapter was :- So, no, I won't be able to try it on anyone else until after I get something to sleep, and get some eat. i do believe you have sleep and eat mixed up in this sentence. It made me laugh and i sure needed that this morning. Thank you for that. :)

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you liked that line. :D The mix up is there on purpose, to show how tired Harry really was. I'm glad someone laughed! Thank you!

    Aery

Title: Chapter Thirty: To live again...and again...and... 21 Dec 2008 7:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That's amazing that Harry can get rid of the mark!

    Did I tell you how glad I am that you are back? Well, I'm gonna tell you again!
    Love it, please hurry and udpate again.

    Briliiant chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. There will be an explination on how he did it in the next chapter. :D I'm glad to be back, this year has been tough. Thank you again!

    Aery

Title: Chapter Twenty Nine: Life Revisited 06 Dec 2008 4:36 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I am so glad that you have updated!

    I feel so bad for the Weasleys. I started to follow your story on ffnet, I think it was, quite awhile back and was disappointed that you had never finished it! That is why I was quite pleased to see an update here today. I really hope that you will not wait as long for the next one, because I have really enjoyed your story!

    Author's Response:

    I haven't abandoned the story, I promise. It just got pushed to the side when life got in the way. I am working on chapter 30, and I hope I will be back to a more regular posting schedule now. Thank you for your review!

    Aery

Title: Chapter 28 Past, Present, and Future 20 May 2008 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    Not sure about Hermoine and Harry, like the idea of him and Luna though...

    Author's Response:

    I'm not sure about Harry with anyone, I still haven't made up my mind yet. I hope you enjoy the latest chapter. Thank you for the review!

    Aery

Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Revelations 25 Mar 2008 3:26 pm
Reviewer: Zigflorian (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I hope you enjoy the latest chapter!

     Aery

Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven: Revelations 06 Mar 2008 8:33 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I reviewed but it got lost in the internet.

    I am really glad to be reading this story.

    I liked how McG is going to give a serious tongue lashing to Dumbledore and Madam Pince scolds her son for using a rather nasty spell in front of her grandson.

    more, more

    Author's Response:

    I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond, as well as update. Life just got in the way. I hope you enjoy the latest chapter! Thank you!

    Aery

Title: Chapter 26 Face Off 12 Feb 2008 8:12 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I read this before breakfast this morning so I guess my brain cells weren't all firing because figuring out who was whom was a bit confusing. I know it should probably be obvious - but I am going to assume that in the cellar, Bill was a PJ'd Arthur and Arthur was actually a PJ'd Severus?

    In other bits - I love Narcissa and her treatment of Lucius. And the fact that you left him hanging all that time! Brilliant.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    You got it all right. :)  I'm loving being able to abuse Lucius now. I'm making up for the fact that he wormed his way over to the good side whether I wanted him in the story or not. (grumbles at the muse) :D

     Thank you for your reveiw!

    Aery

Title: Chapter 26 Face Off 12 Feb 2008 1:49 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story but I am confused. Help - I thought Bill was killed not Arthur Wesley.

    I went back and reread the chapter before this one and this one but I still am confused.

    Author's Response:

    Several of the people were Polyjuiced to look like someone else for their safety. Severus took Arthur's place, because he was leading the mission. Therefore, Arthur had to take the looks of someone else, so he went as Bill. Narcissa and Draco were also Polyjuiced as well, but more about who they were there as will come up in 27. :)

    Hope that helped, and thank you for the review!

    Aery


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