| Title: Chapter 15: Arguments, Debates, and Prodigal Son’s…Oh My!
| 08 Jun 2007 12:42 pm
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| Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed)
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Fantastic story, I really like it. Sorry that I didn't review for all of the other chapters, but I just started to read this story and read through the 15 chapters straight through. Unfortunately, now I have less than 3 hours until I have to be at work, as I stayed up all night reading. Oh well, it was well worth it. I loved the idea of the trio (the golden one, as there are now two trios) thinking that Neville is Snape's son. Wow. I can't wait to see what will happen when Harry finally finds out. Also, I love the fact that Lucius is on the light side. I've read some stories like that in the past, but I thought the idea that it was Lucius retrieving all of the memories and information of the horcruxes was rather clever. I think that one of my favorite scenes of the chapter was when Snape poured himself a firewhiskey and proceeded to down it instantly. Exactly something that he would do, especially considering that he watched a memory of his son nearly dying. Excellent story over all. I can't wait for an update, and I am very interested in finding out who the spy in the Order is. Please update soon. I hope that everything works out for you in regards to the military. My father was also in the military, but he retired recently after an 18 month tour in Iraq. Good luck!
Author's Response: I don't think I could tell you how many stories I've stayed up all night just because I couldn't stop. It is a huge compliment that you've done that because of mine! Thank you! My Beta also got a kick over Severus' reaction after the Chamber memory. I agree, typical teenager, driving his father to drinking and he doesn't even know it. :D Thank you again! Aery
| Title: Chapter 15: Arguments, Debates, and Prodigal Son’s…Oh My!
| 07 Jun 2007 6:31 am
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| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed)
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Neville!??? What a rotten trick. Here I thought Hermione was going to figure it out and somehow Harry would get to learn the truth as well but nooooo! Well, it was a great chapter and small is definately better than none at all. I hope that Congress lays off soon. Our country hasn't had this much infighting in decades.
Author's Response: Hehehe me? Rotten? hmm...yes, I do believe I can be. :D Hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Thank you! Aery
| Title: Chapter 15: Arguments, Debates, and Prodigal Son’s…Oh My!
| 07 Jun 2007 5:34 am
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| Reviewer: blue artemis (Anonymous)
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You know, I would think that Hermione would figure that out better, considering they've all been wondering about Harry's appearance. Thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response: Denial, it's so wonderfully blinding at times. Thank you, Aery
| Title: Chapter 3: New Home at What Price?
| 04 Jun 2007 8:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Owlish (Anonymous)
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It's been good so far, though I rather detested the link to David Thewlis and the slime-monster-of-doom, utterly detestable film. He's a much better actor than that shite showed him to be
Author's Response: I'm not exactly sure what link your talking about here. Sorry you detested it though, hope you like the rest of the story! Thank you, Aery
Awesome! I love this story. And I love how you finally came out and said that Snape was Harry's dad. Unfortunately, that's when I came on the picture and now I am dying to see it happen. I don't know how frequent your updates are but here's hoping! The reasoning you use for the magic, the way Harry lived, the Horcruxes, and what not is all very believable. I love this story!
Author's Response: Making the reasoning believable has been one of my main goals while writing. I'm very relieved that it has turned out that way! Thank you! Aery
| Title: Chapter 14: Complicated Coincidences
| 22 May 2007 2:32 am
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| Reviewer: NitaPotter (Anonymous)
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Hey!! I have now read all 14 chapters of your fic so far!!! I love it! It's a shame that you don't have more reviews...but..hopefully that will be fixed soon enough!! Keep up the great work! So,,,Lucius was a spy...the plot keeps thickening!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Nita
Author's Response: Thank you! Hehe, I fought my Muse over Lucius. Fought hard, She won, lol. Thank you! Aery
So are they ever going to tell Harry?
Author's Response: Harry will find out, eventually. Can't tell you when though, that would ruin the suspence. :) Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy the rest! Aery
A new twist! Lovely!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you, Aery
| Title: Chapter 14: Complicated Coincidences
| 20 May 2007 2:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous)
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