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Reviews For Connections
The writing of this chapter is smooth and free of obvious errors--something I greatly appreciate. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review and I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter and the characterization. As I have told others, I write them the way I picture them and I'm just happy when others enjoy my take on things. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Tehe! Great line. Your characterization of Snape is spot on! Great start! I like your Harry as well, he's fresh and bright eyed, but not timid. Nice job! Author's Response: Hi Jan! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you like my view of the characters. Snape is stern and snarky, but I still think he's lovable underneath. :) But then I've been told I'm a bit biased, lol. And I can see Harry as polite and respectful, but not one to grovel. He's got a good mind and plenty of opinions, which when confronted with Snape, he's not afraid to voice. Thanks again for your kind words. Fox
Tracy Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy :) Glad you are enjoying it. And as often happens to me the characters take over and seem to write themselves a good bit of the time...especially the stubborn ones like Snape. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you and yes a bit of a differnt angle I've been told. Glad you are liking the story thus far. An update should be fairly soon.
Author's Response: Thank you again for your kind words. I am glad that you are enjoying the story and I hope to have more posted soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad that you are enjoying the idea and the story thus far. I'll try to keep the updates fairly frequent. :) |
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