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Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 01 Jun 2007 8:03 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely ending with the dream. I'm intrigued about how you will show this connection making a difference to canonical events.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I have a few ideas that will be a twist on canon events so stay tuned. Glad that you are continuing to enjoy the story. :)
Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 27 May 2007 2:48 am
Reviewer: tia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ooooh this is so good! more, please more! i love it! more! hurry!

    Author's Response: Thanks! :) Glad that you like it thus far. More should be ready soon. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 24 May 2007 3:40 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    This story just gets stronger and better with every chapter! Absolutely wonderful stuff hon! It looks like Snape has finally caved in and not only admitted his concern, but acted upon it!
    Loved it!
    Tracy

    Author's Response:

    Hi Tracy,

    Oh yes, he acted on it alright, though I'm not sure Harry is too thrilled with it at present. But at least it's a start. Thank you so very much for your kind words and I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 24 May 2007 12:54 am
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    I've actually already reviewed the story at ff.net, but I had a quick question. Not that I mind CP, in fact I often think that Harry may deserve it, but I'm not sure about a particular point. If this had been any other student not including Draco or Harry, and the student had talken to Snape that way, would Snape still spank him or her? He wouldn't have the right to do that with another student, although I could see how it would be under his jurisdiction to do this to Harry and Draco. But I was curious if Snape had this right over all his students, or his Slytherins, or just Draco and Harry.

    I hope my question/observation made sense. I check daily to see if you update, justifying my rereading of this chapter. Please update Soon!!

    ~Vint.

    Author's Response:

    Hi Vint,

    Just my personal opinion and preference about things, and I'm sure that there are plenty out there who would dispute it, but I think that Snape would have the authority to handle his Slytherins as he saw fit, as long as it wasn't cruel or excessive. So I could see him spanking one of them for major rudeness or something serious such as trying to take on a troll. As for those not in his house, I see it as any teacher had the right to correct a child, not just Snape. They each might use differnt techniques on different students according to different offenses, but to me McGonagall had as much authoirty to spank say Draco or any other student as Snape did.

    But most of all, when it comes right down to it, it's all just fanfic, lol. It's just the way I pictured things and wanted things to happen. Your question/observation made sense and I'm hoping my answer did, lol.

    I'm very glad you are enjoying the story and thank you for reading and reviewing...in two places even! :D The next chapter should be up soon.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 23 May 2007 8:09 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! Haha, you did it Snape. Great dream sequence! Poor Harry, but great fic! Really great job! Thanks so much for updating!

    Author's Response:

    Hi Jan,

    You are very welcome and thank YOU for the kind review. Glad you like the dream. :) Yep, Snape has finally taken the first step. Now to convince our dear Potions Master that he has to take more. That could take a while.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 23 May 2007 2:00 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    ARGH! Why all these chiff hangers?
    On second thougt, don't ansewr that. Being a fanfiction writer myself, I love bugging my betas with cliffies...
    PLEASE update SOON!

    Author's Response: Hmm...wonder if I should say the next chapter might be a sort of cliffie too? *grin* And an update will be along pretty soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad to know you are enjoying it. :)
Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 23 May 2007 1:33 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry getting spanked like that! Excellent chapter and the ending makes me want to see what happens next so please write more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Well, poor Harry in one sense, but not so much in another. He's finding out he might be accountable to someone now. Someone that might care about him a little bit. But I'm going to hush now before I give away things from later chapters. :) So glad that you are enjoying the story and thank you very much for reading and reviewiing. More will be on the way soon.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 23 May 2007 12:49 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, you update fast! I love how descriptive you are with your writing--especially during the Halloween feast :) I'm so glad Snape is beginning to feel concerned for Harry, and I also like the fact that he was virtually punished no more or less than Draco. Snape, deep down, is a fair man.

    Great chapter! I'm anxiously awaiting more :)

    Author's Response:

    Hi Jade,

    Thank you so very much for the wonderful review. I love trying to get the picture in my mind into print, so I'm glad that the descriptions work for you and that you like them. I've always loved reading and writing details, though now I find myself writing a lot more dialogue than I used to. It depends on where the characters want to take me as a good bit of the time I'm just along for the ride and trying to type fast enough to keep up!

    And yes, Snape is beginning to care, though he's still plenty hesitant. At least he finally took the first step. Yay! You caught what I was trying to do with the boys' punishment. Pretty much the same thing for the same 'crime'. I agree, Snape is fair. Stern as all get out, but fair. :)

    I'm almost done with the next chapter so hopefully not much longer to wait. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

    Fox

     


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