| Title: Chapter 12 Choose Your Weapon
| 23 Apr 2008 12:20 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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Great story. I can see Draco being jealous although he does at least nominally have a family. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. And yes, Draco has a family but it is in name only for the most part. He is still a lonely, insecure little boy that needs firm guidance...like the kind his Uncle Sev can give. ;) Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks again for taking the time to review.
Good chapter, although you really seem to get into describing the spankings in great detail. I don't think that the mechanics of the spanking & the precise location of the swats really serve to advance the story :P
Author's Response: Well, I tend to write details on everything. I enjoy that sort of style and like mental pictures. Perhaps it doesn't advance it as much as some other chapters but I think it all fits together and makes the story what it is. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
| Title: Chapter 12 Choose Your Weapon
| 22 Apr 2008 6:39 pm
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| Reviewer: rosworms (Signed)
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wonderful. i love this story... do wish it was updated more often, but anything is better than nothing.
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad that you like the story. I will continue to update as I can.
I'm really glad you found time to update! Shame on those boys for fighting. Hopefully they've learned thier lesson. Good chapter and I hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review and I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. I think the boys are gradually learning. Maybe be the time the holidays are over they will be able to tolerate each other a bit more...maybe. Actually I'm still trying to get the next chapter finished and they are getting along more and it's proving to be as hard to write as them not getting along, lol. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)
I'm so happy you updated this story! I find the interaction between Severus and the boys to be really sweet and amusing. Even though I don't really care for Draco, I felt the scene between him and Severus enjoyable to read, and you seem to be keeping him well in character (a spoiled, jealous little brat). I can't wait for the next chapter, I wonder if Severus plans to do something with this new knowledge. Poor Harry, he's such a sweet child ^^. Please post again soon!
Author's Response: Glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I love Sev and his boys (like you can't guess that, lol) and it is fun to write about them. Thank you for your kind words regarding the scene with Sev and Draco. I think that kiddo is misunderstood a lot of times. No promises on when the next chapter will be ready, but I think it will contain a few surprises. Thanks again for your feedback. :)
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