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Title: Chapter 12 Choose Your Weapon 23 Apr 2008 12:20 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story. I can see Draco being jealous although he does at least nominally have a family. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review. And yes, Draco has a family but it is in name only for the most part. He is still a lonely, insecure little boy that needs firm guidance...like the kind his Uncle Sev can give. ;) Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks again for taking the time to review.
Title: Chapter 12 Choose Your Weapon 22 Apr 2008 8:11 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, although you really seem to get into describing the spankings in great detail. I don't think that the mechanics of the spanking & the precise location of the swats really serve to advance the story :P

    Author's Response: Well, I tend to write details on everything. I enjoy that sort of style and like mental pictures. Perhaps it doesn't advance it as much as some other chapters but I think it all fits together and makes the story what it is. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 12 Choose Your Weapon 22 Apr 2008 6:39 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful. i love this story... do wish it was updated more often, but anything is better than nothing.

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad that you like the story. I will continue to update as I can.
Title: Chapter 12 Choose Your Weapon 22 Apr 2008 7:56 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really glad you found time to update! Shame on those boys for fighting. Hopefully they've learned thier lesson. Good chapter and I hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review and I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. I think the boys are gradually learning. Maybe be the time the holidays are over they will be able to tolerate each other a bit more...maybe. Actually I'm still trying to get the next chapter finished and they are getting along more and it's proving to be as hard to write as them not getting along, lol. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)
Title: Chapter 12 Choose Your Weapon 21 Apr 2008 11:47 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so happy you updated this story! I find the interaction between Severus and the boys to be really sweet and amusing. Even though I don't really care for Draco, I felt the scene between him and Severus enjoyable to read, and you seem to be keeping him well in character (a spoiled, jealous little brat). I can't wait for the next chapter, I wonder if Severus plans to do something with this new knowledge. Poor Harry, he's such a sweet child ^^. Please post again soon!

    Author's Response: Glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I love Sev and his boys (like you can't guess that, lol) and it is fun to write about them. Thank you for your kind words regarding the scene with Sev and Draco. I think that kiddo is misunderstood a lot of times. No promises on when the next chapter will be ready, but I think it will contain a few surprises. Thanks again for your feedback. :)
Title: Chapter 11 - Three's a Crowd 17 Jan 2008 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good story. I wonder if Draco and Harry will learn to get along?

    Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you like it. :) And yes, the boys will eventually be able to get along a bit better. Though it will take a while and try Snape's patience.
Title: Chapter 11 - Three's a Crowd 06 Dec 2007 3:02 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I love watching Harry and Draco learn to get along together.

    Author's Response: Glad you like the boys' interaction. There will be plenty more during the course of the holidays, some worse and some better. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 11 - Three's a Crowd 05 Dec 2007 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I'm glad to see the two of them getting along somewhat okay. Great chapter and hopefully more soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! :) Glad that you liked the chapter. Yes, Harry and Draco will have to form a temporary truce of sorts it seems. And they can do it...the only question is WILL they? Hopefully more will be revealed in the next few chapters which I plan to work on this weekend.
Title: Chapter 11 - Three's a Crowd 05 Dec 2007 6:58 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    When I saw this update I was so excited, but then I realized that I had already read this on fanfiction.net. I'm pretty sure I reviewed it over there. Anyway, just so you know, I enjoyed it just as much the second time around. Great chapter. I love how Harry was with all the Christmas stuff. Kind of makes me want to sing a few Christmas carols and decorate my tree.

    I hope you get a chance to update soon. I'm dying to know what sort of trouble Draco and Harry will get up to, because I know it's inevitable. Thanks...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for the review, especially since you'd already read the chapter. :) I'm glad it was worth reading again and got you in a Christmasy mood. I know it did me as well when I was writing it, lol. The next few chapters will probably help with my own decorating and such as I will be picturing the boys getting ready for their Christmas.

    But what's this about Harry and Draco in trouble?? *gasps in pretend shock* Surely you jest! Not those two?! LOL...there will be plenty of trouble ahead, trust me. I plan to start working on the next chapter this weekend as soon as I get done with the next chapter of Second Chance. When the muse hits, it's all or nothing!

Title: Chapter 10 - Change of Plans 26 Nov 2007 11:10 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story! It's so cute and entertaining. I want more! Please?

    Author's Response: More? Hmm...I'll see what I can do. *grin* Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Even if I'm slow responding, I do really appreciate it and I'm glad that you like the story. :)

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