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Title: Chapter 9 - Holiday Plans 12 Aug 2007 6:51 am
Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ahh, good chapter... I loved the hurt/comfort scene between Harry and Severus!

    This is going to be a fun Christmas for Harry.

    Author's Response: Thank you and I'm gald that you enjoyed it. Yes, it will be an interesting but fun time for Harry. And Snape as well.
Title: Chapter 9 - Holiday Plans 12 Aug 2007 3:56 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I saw you had updated on ff.net and was so glad because I love this story! :) I also love how McGonagall is one of the only people who can make Snape feel ashamed. lol. I can't wait to see how things turn out for Snape and Harry over Christmas break. Will Draco end up staying as well? I hope Snape speaks to him about inclination to taunt...

    Anyway, great chapter! I'm looking forward to more :)

    Author's Response:

    Hi Jade, thanks for the lovely review. I love writing Sev and Minerva, or as it turns out  in most cases, letting them wirte it themselves, lol. Those two have a mind of their own when it comes to interacting. As for Draco *looks at Jade and wonders if she is a spy* sshhh...not going to say yet. Let's just say the holidays are going to be interesting, but fun. I can't wait to get the next few chapters all typed up.

    Thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)

    Fox

Title: Chapter 8 - Questions and Answers 11 Jul 2007 5:02 am
Reviewer: gizmama (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story. I'm hoping to update sometime soon, but unfortunately a certain Potions Master is not making writing the next chapter very easy! If I can just get Snape to behave, things would be great. *goes looking for Minerva to get Sev back in line*
Title: Chapter 8 - Questions and Answers 09 Jul 2007 5:56 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    UPDATE!! Pretty please?

    Author's Response:

    lol, hi, Jade. I am working on it, I promise. Life and the plot bunnies are both being a bit unhelpful. As soon as I get an idea, life gets in the way. Then when I have a moment, the bunnies are sulking from being ignored and don't want to play. But I will not abandon the story and an update will be posted as soon as I can. Thanks for wanting to read more. :)

     Fox

Title: Chapter 8 - Questions and Answers 27 Jun 2007 4:16 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Lovely chapter. :D I loved the length and the content and I loved the discussions, especially how Harry said that he wanted SNape to care. Snape answered very in character, and then i loved how he switched the topic because he was uncomfortable with such things as caring and emotions. hehe, Great chapter.

    "It would reflect badly on me if I allowed any student, but particularly Gryffindor's Golden Boy, to become ill from being chilled. Even though the same student was foolish enough to sit outside, with no cloak, for hours, for no reason." The Potions Master gave Harry a stern look as he tucked the blanket around the child.

    *sigh of happiness*

    I like Harry's outburst in this chapter. It's good for him to say what's really on his mind, and also to find out that Snape really won't kill him. XD Not really, just assign him lines. I loved the caring side of Snape in this one, how he went out and found Harry outside, then warmed him up with a blanet and they talked. Really talked. Very good job on that. Normally we don't see good, long talks.

    Thanks so much for the update! I feel all fuzzy inside. XD

    Author's Response:

    Wow, thank you so much, Jan, for the long and lovely review. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter. LOL, I like long chapters myself and I'm glad you do as well since I can't seem to write a truly short one.

    To me, Snape has always been willing to help and/or talk to a student that really sought information. And this is no different, even though he's not one hundred percent thrilled with the idea of the bond himself. Both Harry and Snape have a great deal of feelings to work through, but this was a big first step for both of them. Now if they can just keep progressing forward and not back.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 7 - Discoveries 27 Jun 2007 4:01 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I love it. :D The Quidditch scene was a nice change, and I love how concerned Snape is over it. I love how even Dumbledore had to tell Snape to calm down. Wonderful.

    I loved the ending of the chapter. Thanks for posting!

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Jan. thanks for your kind words and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I had fun writing the upset-caring-but-not-gonna-admit-it Snape.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 8 - Questions and Answers 23 Jun 2007 6:32 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chspter! I'm glad some parts of the bond were explained becuase I'd been wondering about that for a while now. Keep up the great writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. More and more will be explained throughout the course of the story because Harry will have plenty more questions and both of them will be dealing with many emotions.
Title: Chapter 8 - Questions and Answers 23 Jun 2007 4:05 am
Reviewer: Belle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beautiful chapter. My heart ached for Harry when he asked whether Snape cared, and at the end when he mused about having a father. You have made both Snape and Harry into such incredible characters!

    Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad that you are enjoying the way I percieve the characters and write them. It's an emotional story, but one that I am having fun writing.
Title: Chapter 8 - Questions and Answers 22 Jun 2007 7:22 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely, lovely chapter, Fox. Poor Harry. He really can be impossible at times, but I felt so sorry for him when he was sobbing down by the lake. And I'm really glad that Snape symphatized with Harry enough not to just haul off and smack him when he was being disrespectful. And I love how you've shown Harry's confusion over the situation by characterizing him as a boy who seems to be struggling a bit between giving in to Snape's kindness and concern and running away from it. Snape is exactly the same way.

    Again, great chapter. You're a very talented writer :)

    Author's Response:

    Aw, thank you so very much, Jade. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. And yes, both Harry and Snape are rather torn about how they want to handle things, with part of them wanting to give in and have the comfort and love that neither of them has ever truly experienced before, while another part of them is fighting against it. Wonder what it will take to finally get them to a point of true understanding of each other? Stay tuned for future chapters to find out. :)

    Thanks again for reading and giving such lovely feedback.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 7 - Discoveries 12 Jun 2007 1:41 am
Reviewer: honore (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love Snape in this- I can see Snape ending up with two boys, but I don't really see the 2 boys getting along. Looking forwrd to seeing how you work this out. Thanks

    Author's Response: Sshh...no revealing ideas. :) The two boys will have some chances to interact later and we will have to see if they and Snape can survive it. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.

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