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Title: Chapter 6 - Doubts 01 Jun 2007 7:11 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice, perspective chapter. It seems that Snape is acting like nothing has changed, but it has, and he knows it. I wonder what he will do now.

    I loved the potipns class scene! "...Hellebore is a powerful purgative and with the mixture you just concocted the fumes alone would have sent us all running for some relief." LOL!

    Author's Response:

    Hi Jan,

    Hehe...I couldn't resist the potions class part. I read and played around with different sites to find something that would work. Don't tell Snape, but Potions sure doesn't come natural to me, lol!

    And yes, Snape being Snape is refusing to take another step forward in the new relationship. Stubborn thing. It's still going to take some time and a few more incidents to make him move toward any more change.

    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and continuing to support me and my stories. I'm very grateful.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 6 - Doubts 01 Jun 2007 4:47 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another awesome chapter! Snape can't aviod talking with Harry forever. Keep up the excellent writing!

    Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Glad that you enjoyed it. And nope he can't avoid it forever, but this is Snape. He'll put it off for as long as he can.
Title: Chapter 6 - Doubts 01 Jun 2007 12:10 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I simply love this story. Everything is so well-connected. I really enjoyed reading the part where Snape is thinking over the past night, because it is so characteristic of him. You've created a perfect Snape. The concern is there, but he's still uncomfortable with it. However, it seems as if it's becoming more difficult for him to talk himself out of actually caring for Harry.

    I'm always so excited when you update, and I absolutely love your writing style!

    Can't wait for more :)

    ~Jade

    Author's Response:

    *blushes profusely* Aww...thank you so very much, Jade, for all your kind words. I am thrilled that you are enjoying the story. As for Snape's characterization...well, I just write him as I see him. And at times as I am told to...the Potions Master is a pushy muse to have! And you are quite right, Snape does care and it's going to start coming out more and more until he can't hide it any longer. But that will be a few chapters, lol. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing; I really appreciate it.

     Fox

Title: Chapter 6 - Doubts 31 May 2007 10:25 pm
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe. I know I usually review on ff.net, but I was here, so I decided to do it here. This bond has got me really curious . . .

    Author's Response:

    Hey, I'm not picky. Here or ff either one is good. :D I just appreciate folks like you reading and reviewing. More facts about the bond will slowly be revealed but I plan to try to keep you curious right to the end. Glad that you are enjoying it though and many thanks for the feedback.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 27 May 2007 2:48 am
Reviewer: tia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ooooh this is so good! more, please more! i love it! more! hurry!

    Author's Response: Thanks! :) Glad that you like it thus far. More should be ready soon. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 4 - Discussion of Duty and a Dismissal 25 May 2007 1:04 am
Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Angsty! Hey keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you are enjoying the story. :)
Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 24 May 2007 3:40 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    This story just gets stronger and better with every chapter! Absolutely wonderful stuff hon! It looks like Snape has finally caved in and not only admitted his concern, but acted upon it!
    Loved it!
    Tracy

    Author's Response:

    Hi Tracy,

    Oh yes, he acted on it alright, though I'm not sure Harry is too thrilled with it at present. But at least it's a start. Thank you so very much for your kind words and I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 24 May 2007 12:54 am
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    I've actually already reviewed the story at ff.net, but I had a quick question. Not that I mind CP, in fact I often think that Harry may deserve it, but I'm not sure about a particular point. If this had been any other student not including Draco or Harry, and the student had talken to Snape that way, would Snape still spank him or her? He wouldn't have the right to do that with another student, although I could see how it would be under his jurisdiction to do this to Harry and Draco. But I was curious if Snape had this right over all his students, or his Slytherins, or just Draco and Harry.

    I hope my question/observation made sense. I check daily to see if you update, justifying my rereading of this chapter. Please update Soon!!

    ~Vint.

    Author's Response:

    Hi Vint,

    Just my personal opinion and preference about things, and I'm sure that there are plenty out there who would dispute it, but I think that Snape would have the authority to handle his Slytherins as he saw fit, as long as it wasn't cruel or excessive. So I could see him spanking one of them for major rudeness or something serious such as trying to take on a troll. As for those not in his house, I see it as any teacher had the right to correct a child, not just Snape. They each might use differnt techniques on different students according to different offenses, but to me McGonagall had as much authoirty to spank say Draco or any other student as Snape did.

    But most of all, when it comes right down to it, it's all just fanfic, lol. It's just the way I pictured things and wanted things to happen. Your question/observation made sense and I'm hoping my answer did, lol.

    I'm very glad you are enjoying the story and thank you for reading and reviewing...in two places even! :D The next chapter should be up soon.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 23 May 2007 8:09 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! Haha, you did it Snape. Great dream sequence! Poor Harry, but great fic! Really great job! Thanks so much for updating!

    Author's Response:

    Hi Jan,

    You are very welcome and thank YOU for the kind review. Glad you like the dream. :) Yep, Snape has finally taken the first step. Now to convince our dear Potions Master that he has to take more. That could take a while.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Trouble With a BIG Capital Lumos T 23 May 2007 2:00 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    ARGH! Why all these chiff hangers?
    On second thougt, don't ansewr that. Being a fanfiction writer myself, I love bugging my betas with cliffies...
    PLEASE update SOON!

    Author's Response: Hmm...wonder if I should say the next chapter might be a sort of cliffie too? *grin* And an update will be along pretty soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad to know you are enjoying it. :)

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