| Title: Chapter 6 - Woman or Monster
| 24 Jul 2022 1:33 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I loved the way that Severus handled Higgnite! I hope that Harry finds some more emotional stability as he grows more comfortable relying on Severus.
| Title: Chapter 5 - Statistically Speaking
| 24 Jul 2022 1:22 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great chapter. The way you’ve portrayed Ron and Hermione’s reactions feels realistic. I’m curious about Higgnite!
| Title: Chapter 4 - To Stay or Not To Stay
| 23 Jul 2022 5:21 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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It was nice seeing Harry wanting Severus in his moment of need. And yeah, Ron is a big lug. At least he has Hermione to steer him straight.
| Title: Chapter 3 - Distancing the World
| 23 Jul 2022 5:04 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That was quite a chapter! Thanks for a fun, compelling, and ultimately touching ride.
| Title: Chapter 2 - Despite the Worst Attentions
| 23 Jul 2022 12:30 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I really like how you’ve portrayed both Snape and Harry. They are both trying to engage, but are uncertain as they navigate this new territory. Thanks for the great chapter.
I loved the opening chapter! It was long and eventful.
Loved it! So what ill-refutable evidence against Snape did Mione believe she had?
hi Ebb, it is Avada Kedavra, not Avada Kadavra
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