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Title: Chapter 5 - Statistically Speaking 24 Jul 2022 1:22 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. The way you’ve portrayed Ron and Hermione’s reactions feels realistic. I’m curious about Higgnite!
Title: Chapter 5 - Statistically Speaking 08 Jul 2007 5:08 am
Reviewer: bluebird88 (Signed) [Report This]
    A very well-written story so far! I love the interaction between Snape and Harry, and I also really appreciate the nice long chapters!

    I was totally cracking up at the idea of Snape having a sweet tooth. A nice humorous touch!

    Author's Response: I helped Snape along a bit with my own cookie obsession. ;) I've always been a sucker for cookies...okay, re-phrasing that. Anyway, thank you very much for the wonderful review! More long chapters are on their way. :) Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 5 - Statistically Speaking 17 Jun 2007 6:29 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    I think your comment about how certain sights and sounds can take a person right back to an event was very insightful! Harry is proving to be as good for Snape as Snape is for Harry.

    As much as I WANT Ron and Hermione to just understand and accept the new father/son relationship between Harry and Snape, I know it would never be that easy. I think you've absolutely nailed how they would react to such a thing.

    Look forward to seeing who this new teacher is!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I am sooo enjoying Sandra Higgnite. lol. She is going to be a contradiction of a person...and maybe dear Snape has ..."found someone" finally. lol. Not quite sure yet. ;)
Title: Chapter 5 - Statistically Speaking 17 Jun 2007 4:51 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    Alot of times in this chapter, you have Harry calling Snape 'dad' with a lower case 'd'. If he's using 'dad' as a title like that, it should be capitalized.

    Other than that little thingie... wonderful story and I'm glad I took the time to read it so far. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response:

    I am sorry about the spelling/grammar/any other thing that involves messed up word usage...I'm not all that great and I'm using a computer that doesn't have spell check. lol. Not that it would catch that! Thank you for pointing it out and I will try very hard to stay more consistant in the upcoming chapters. ;) Thank you for the GREAT! review. You rock! =).


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