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Title: Chapter 6 - Woman or Monster 14 Jul 2007 3:07 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. An inconsistancy that you may not have noticed- Last chapter you said Ron wasn't taking potions but yet he was in this chapter. I'm sure a good beta will probably fix those little errors. Anyways great chapter and hopefully more soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the great review!!! I'm sure that you are right about the beta. lol. ;) I'll be recruiting soon. Enjoy the chap.'s to come!
Title: Chapter 6 - Woman or Monster 14 Jul 2007 1:04 am
Reviewer: bluebird88 (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting new development with the DADA teacher. I find the idea of an illness that drains magic an interesting possibility - after all, if it is possible to lose eyesight, or hearing, or mobility as a result of a disease, then why not magic? And I can definately see how it would have some pretty significant psychological issues inherent in it. An interesting idea, and one with a lot of potential in terms of character development.

    I really liked the scene where Snape didn't show up on time, as well. I found his parental side very amusing, and liked how you explored Harry's lingering insecurities and his initial fear and flashbacks. I find it very much in keeping with the typical emotional progression of abuse victims - steady progress, but occasional regressions. Recovery doesn't happen all at once - it's a long, slow proccess, and there are obstacles and setbacks.

    Author's Response: I am really glad that you have liked the story thus far! Thank you for the wonderful review!! I wanted to make Harry's recovering as realisitc as I most possibly could. lol. I've dealt with what he's going through personally so I think writing this story is more about getting out how I feel than anything else. lol. And other fans get to benefit. ;) How cool is that. Anyway, I am loving how Snape has just grown into this parental figure. Not that he doesn't have his moments where he is TOTALLY out of depth, but the man is amazing. I am having a blast writing about these two! Glad that you enjoyed it so far!!
Title: Chapter 6 - Woman or Monster 13 Jul 2007 5:53 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, I love the fact that Severus took what Harry said about Higgnite seriously, and went and talked to her about it. It's good to see Sev being such a father and not second guessing his feeling for Harry. Looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the great work and update soon. LES

    Author's Response: Aww! That was such a great review...I am glad that you liked it! I was a little insecure about posting this chapter because of the new character, but your wonderful response has helped bolster my fangirl ego. ;) Enjoy the next chapter. . .:) Coming Soon.
Title: Chapter 5 - Statistically Speaking 08 Jul 2007 5:08 am
Reviewer: bluebird88 (Signed) [Report This]
    A very well-written story so far! I love the interaction between Snape and Harry, and I also really appreciate the nice long chapters!

    I was totally cracking up at the idea of Snape having a sweet tooth. A nice humorous touch!

    Author's Response: I helped Snape along a bit with my own cookie obsession. ;) I've always been a sucker for cookies...okay, re-phrasing that. Anyway, thank you very much for the wonderful review! More long chapters are on their way. :) Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jun 2007 7:59 pm
Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it!!! Go peaves!! LOL

    Author's Response: Heehee...yep! Thank you for the great review. :)
Title: Chapter 5 - Statistically Speaking 17 Jun 2007 6:29 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    I think your comment about how certain sights and sounds can take a person right back to an event was very insightful! Harry is proving to be as good for Snape as Snape is for Harry.

    As much as I WANT Ron and Hermione to just understand and accept the new father/son relationship between Harry and Snape, I know it would never be that easy. I think you've absolutely nailed how they would react to such a thing.

    Look forward to seeing who this new teacher is!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I am sooo enjoying Sandra Higgnite. lol. She is going to be a contradiction of a person...and maybe dear Snape has ..."found someone" finally. lol. Not quite sure yet. ;)
Title: Chapter 5 - Statistically Speaking 17 Jun 2007 4:51 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    Alot of times in this chapter, you have Harry calling Snape 'dad' with a lower case 'd'. If he's using 'dad' as a title like that, it should be capitalized.

    Other than that little thingie... wonderful story and I'm glad I took the time to read it so far. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response:

    I am sorry about the spelling/grammar/any other thing that involves messed up word usage...I'm not all that great and I'm using a computer that doesn't have spell check. lol. Not that it would catch that! Thank you for pointing it out and I will try very hard to stay more consistant in the upcoming chapters. ;) Thank you for the GREAT! review. You rock! =).

Title: Chapter 4 - To Stay or Not To Stay 15 Jun 2007 4:30 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Another amazing chapter! I loved how worried Snape was! And poor Harry has been through such hell! You did a beautiful job communicating just how emotionally fragile Harry is at this time and who wouldn't be after what Lucius put him through. Snape IS one of the few people that can understand the emotions Harry has been forced to deal with too!
    Need I say I'm looking forward to the next chapter hon? LOL!
    Tracy

    Author's Response: Aww! *blushes* I am having as much fun writing it as you are reading it. ;) I love creating this dinamic between S and H. It's too fun!!! lol. Thank you, for the stunning review.
Title: Chapter 4 - To Stay or Not To Stay 14 Jun 2007 9:59 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really loving the Snape/Harry interaction but can really really do without the HR/R romance. Its nauseating. Please tell me they end it soon.

    Author's Response: Sorry, More HR/R romance is budding in the air...I don't respect their characters very much so I'm writing them down. I could try fixing that up in chapter six, but five is already mostly done. . .Sorry. Thank you, for the wonderful review!!! I am glad that you are enjoying my fav. characters H and S. :)
Title: Chapter 4 - To Stay or Not To Stay 14 Jun 2007 6:50 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! It sounds like Harry will have a hard time catching up in classes. Excellent so far and I'm looking forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response: WoW! Thank you for the review. You're right about his classes...but I have a plan for that. ;) The next chapter is coming along splendidly...so you'll have more of Heat Wave soon.

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