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Reviews For Heat Wave
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review!!! I'm sure that you are right about the beta. lol. ;) I'll be recruiting soon. Enjoy the chap.'s to come!
I really liked the scene where Snape didn't show up on time, as well. I found his parental side very amusing, and liked how you explored Harry's lingering insecurities and his initial fear and flashbacks. I find it very much in keeping with the typical emotional progression of abuse victims - steady progress, but occasional regressions. Recovery doesn't happen all at once - it's a long, slow proccess, and there are obstacles and setbacks. Author's Response: I am really glad that you have liked the story thus far! Thank you for the wonderful review!! I wanted to make Harry's recovering as realisitc as I most possibly could. lol. I've dealt with what he's going through personally so I think writing this story is more about getting out how I feel than anything else. lol. And other fans get to benefit. ;) How cool is that. Anyway, I am loving how Snape has just grown into this parental figure. Not that he doesn't have his moments where he is TOTALLY out of depth, but the man is amazing. I am having a blast writing about these two! Glad that you enjoyed it so far!!
Author's Response: Aww! That was such a great review...I am glad that you liked it! I was a little insecure about posting this chapter because of the new character, but your wonderful response has helped bolster my fangirl ego. ;) Enjoy the next chapter. . .:) Coming Soon.
I was totally cracking up at the idea of Snape having a sweet tooth. A nice humorous touch! Author's Response: I helped Snape along a bit with my own cookie obsession. ;) I've always been a sucker for cookies...okay, re-phrasing that. Anyway, thank you very much for the wonderful review! More long chapters are on their way. :) Enjoy!
Author's Response: Heehee...yep! Thank you for the great review. :)
As much as I WANT Ron and Hermione to just understand and accept the new father/son relationship between Harry and Snape, I know it would never be that easy. I think you've absolutely nailed how they would react to such a thing. Look forward to seeing who this new teacher is! Tracy Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I am sooo enjoying Sandra Higgnite. lol. She is going to be a contradiction of a person...and maybe dear Snape has ..."found someone" finally. lol. Not quite sure yet. ;)
Other than that little thingie... wonderful story and I'm glad I took the time to read it so far. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: I am sorry about the spelling/grammar/any other thing that involves messed up word usage...I'm not all that great and I'm using a computer that doesn't have spell check. lol. Not that it would catch that! Thank you for pointing it out and I will try very hard to stay more consistant in the upcoming chapters. ;) Thank you for the GREAT! review. You rock! =).
Need I say I'm looking forward to the next chapter hon? LOL! Tracy Author's Response: Aww! *blushes* I am having as much fun writing it as you are reading it. ;) I love creating this dinamic between S and H. It's too fun!!! lol. Thank you, for the stunning review.
Author's Response: Sorry, More HR/R romance is budding in the air...I don't respect their characters very much so I'm writing them down. I could try fixing that up in chapter six, but five is already mostly done. . .Sorry. Thank you, for the wonderful review!!! I am glad that you are enjoying my fav. characters H and S. :)
Author's Response: WoW! Thank you for the review. You're right about his classes...but I have a plan for that. ;) The next chapter is coming along splendidly...so you'll have more of Heat Wave soon. |
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