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Title: Chapter 2 - Despite the Worst Attentions 02 Jun 2007 11:34 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great chapter. It's good to see that Severus is taking the responsibility of Harry's guardianship seriously, and telling him that he wants to know if Harry has a problem with nightmares or anything in general. It would have been so easy for Sev to dump Harry in the house and ignore him the rest of the time he was there. Looking forward to more, keep up the good work, and update soon. LES

    Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted Snape to have just as much trouble adjusting and figuring things out as Harry. It is BOTH of their journeys that I am trying to portray here. ;) I wish I could give you a teaser for the next chapter - which I will post soon, no worries - because I really think you're going to like where it's going. Here's a minor spoiler...Harry isn't completely honest with our dear Snape and as a result something unexpected takes place. There, hope that piqued your intrest. lol. :) Thanks again for the great review!!! Keep reading. :)
Title: Chapter 1 01 Jun 2007 5:12 am
Reviewer: Emma Lipardi (Signed) [Report This]
    I would like more. Please?

    Harry needs to get away from it all. I hope this gives him the rest he needs.

    One or two word mix-ups. Addition should be edition. Otherwise, well written and good grammar throughout.

    Emma

    Author's Response: Yes, I am very sorry about the words that are confused....I don't have spellcheck on my computer. :p So I'm doing it all by ear. lol. I will try to improve. Thank you for the review! More is on the way. :)
Title: Chapter 1 28 May 2007 12:41 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! That was fantastic! First, I LOVE angst and you write it beautifully! Harry's pain at the loss of his family was so poignant. Even though part of him knows that he would never have earned their love or approval, now that they are dead, not even the possibility exists any longer.

    I love how torn Snape becomes after spending time with Harry. He wants to much to hold onto all his old grudges and hatred, and yet his nobility of character won't let him. Of course it becomes all but impossible for him to keep a proper resentment going once he learns of the murder of Harry's family.

    Dumbledore and all the other characters were beautifully written too! I avidly look forward to the continuation of this story hon! By the way, thank you also for your support of my story.

    Tracy

    Author's Response: Oooooh, another angst lover!!! Wonderful! ;) Thank you for the stunning review!
Title: Chapter 1 14 May 2007 7:57 pm
Reviewer: blue artemis (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this quite a bit. Please give me more!

    Author's Response: Your wish is my command...at least, our goals are the same for the moment. ;) More coming!!
Title: Chapter 1 14 May 2007 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Casey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was rely good, it was long which is always a bonus lol. I got down half the page and i was like whoa i'v got loads more to read. You'v got more written? Yay! Update soon plz.

    Author's Response: I LUV to read long, long good fics. I wanted mine to fit into at least ONE catagory! LoL.
Title: Chapter 1 13 May 2007 3:26 am
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome so far! Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response:

    breannatala,

    Thank you!!!  

Title: Chapter 1 13 May 2007 2:23 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant. Wonderful style. Good characterization. More please..

    Author's Response:

    Mel,

    Awe...WoW! Thanks. 

Title: Chapter 1 12 May 2007 6:01 pm
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay!
    Though its a shame dear old Tom is dead now...
    Still wanting to read more,
    Song

    Author's Response:

    Song,

    Thank you for your review!!! Tom will be dearly missed. lol. and more is on its way. :) Keep reading and enjoying the story! 

Title: Chapter 1 12 May 2007 5:43 pm
Reviewer: robin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi, the first chapter is really good, so keep going and update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Robin.

    Will do. ;). Thank you, for the review!! 

Title: Chapter 1 12 May 2007 6:50 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good story so far. I'm surprised Harry was able to just kill Voldemort right then. I like this so far and I look forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Alexis,

    Thank you for your wonderful compliments. The reason I let Harry kill the Dark Lord off so early...and easily is because him being dead causes the entire summer that I wanted to write about. ;). I didn't really want to go for a "grand battle to the death" like some great fic writers...instead, I just wanted him out of the way as quickly as possible so I could get on with my Snape, Harry story. lol. I am just addicted to Snape, Harry interaction, I suppose. I am so glad there are places on the web like potionsandsnitches to give us fic writers a fix. =). ;). Thank you again for the great review, I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story.  


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