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Title: Chapter 24 12 Oct 2013 9:17 am
Reviewer: manx (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry is an idiot thinking he can run to Lupin and get to whine about Snape not trusting him after Harry has lied to Lupin. Heh what did he expect...
Title: Chapter 24 17 Sep 2013 4:49 am
Reviewer: bianca_slate (Signed) [Report This]
    "For all your insistence that you need to know everything that concerns you, Potter, your behavior leaves people reluctant to share anything with you. One is never sure if you will fly into a fury or if you will have no reaction at all and will consequently ignore information you are given for your own safety."

    This is exactly what happens! I'm amazed to see it in print! You are a brilliant author!


    "I'm sorry you don't agree with his assessment of you. I have always gone to great lengths to defend you, since I believe your positive traits far outweigh the negative ones. But don't you DARE --" Lupin suddenly brought his hand thunderously down on the top of the desk, making Harry leap back as the platter of scones and tarts clattered to the floor. He dropped his voice to a harsh whisper. "Don't you dare come in here and expect me to disagree with him after taking advantage of my trust." His normally warm amber eyes, now like smoldering coals, bore into Harry's. "I left Hermione the book, since I see no way of keeping half a dozen teenagers from getting their hands on another copy. I could Obliviate the lot of them... but that is too much like what the Ministry is currently doing, and I would be concerned about what that spell would do to Luna's fragile state of mind. But don't you dare --" Lupin took out his wand and pointed it at Harry's chest. "-- come in here and talk to me about how trustworthy you are."

    I'm highly impressed that you have Remus taking this stance and not just patting Harry on the head and fluffing over his misdeeds. Although, I *do* wonder if Remus can maintain this attitude because Harry is disguised as Hadrian, instead of looking like Harry Potter, when he says it.
Title: Chapter 24 04 Aug 2013 1:00 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a well thought out chapter!
Title: Chapter 24 02 Aug 2013 10:02 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I love this story. Thanks for writing it and please don't leave me hanging off this cliff for too long.

    Author's Response: Thanks! There should be more soon. I've sent two chapters off to my beta, althought since they're short I might combine them into one. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-)
Title: Chapter 24 02 Aug 2013 2:20 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!!
    Poor Harry!!

    It seems though that Snape is beginning to understand Harry better and was actually quite patient with him and even handled the situation better than Lupin.

    I've got so many questions! lol You keep us on the edge of our seats, that's for sure. I can't wait till Harry's parentage is revealed. I'm dying for that moment!!!

    Anyway, great chapter as usual. Can't wait for the next one.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Harry is getting closer to finding out, but there are still a lot of things that need to happen.

Title: Chapter 24 02 Aug 2013 4:46 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    A very well-written and interesting chapter. I did not expect Harry to get caught so quickly. I liked the confrontation with Lupin. You are doing a good job with the triangle of Harry, Snape and Lupin.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    Yes, I figured getting caught the very same day would be a nice change from the usual way Harry's escapades come to light (in other words, way too late). Harry, for sure, did not expect to get caught... he was so sure he had pulled one over on Lupin. It will be explained in the next chapter or two how Harry's deception was found out so quickly.


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