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Reviews For For The Boy Who Has Everything
I'll be saving the link to read this again. What makes it so intense is the lack of explanations - too many writers feel the need to explain every character's intentions but you allow the story to reveal these emotions through the characters physical reactions.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I do have a chapter that's almost ready. I'm just a little busy with exams and the holidays right now. Hopefully I'll have it posted over the weekend.
This story is great and original :)
Author's Response: Thanks! He does realize it, but there isn't much he can do about it. Harry will not simply take his word for it, because there isn't enough trust between them for that. Harry is refusing to look at the evidence Snape is offering to provide (every time Snape tells him to talk to Dumbledore's portrait, Harry refuses). Harry hasn't told him what evidence he has for being convinced he is still a horcrux, and Snape can't make an argument against something he doesn't know, so nothing he says is going to actually make a difference, because Harry is always going to be thinking he knows better because he knows something Snape doesn't know. There's just nothing else Snaoe can do, at the moment.
Author's Response: Yes. It was a collection of words that reference the Chamber of Secrets and Tom Riddle's diary.
I am confused about one thing though. Did Lupin send Harry a gift after all? That was a little unclear. Okay, when will Snape and Lupin find out that Harry's magic is back and back in full force. I 'm dying for Snape to know that Harry learnt the spell that Draco couldn't! Can't wait to see his face!! Poor Harry though. He just doesn't trust adults at all. I just hope that he doesn't do something stupid and that Snape intercepts him before he does. I am also confused about what Hermione was trying to do. Maybe I'm slow, but I have no idea, other than thinking that she again is trying to hint at Harry that she knows that he is really Hadrian. I can't wait till the next update!!! You are killing me here, with these cliffies! Omg!! I just thought of something. If Harry uses the diary and only someone who is blood related can read it, Snape will be able to read it. She is try ing to prove that Hadrian is Harry and not really Snape's son. Does that include the little note too? Maybe she thinks that Snape won't be able to read the note because Harry is Hadrian andshe thinks that Hadrian is not really Snape's son. Okay, I'm rambling here. But maybe Harry will use the same logic eventually and realise that Snape was able to read it, meaning that he is Harry's father. Okay, I'm rambling! lol That is because I'm on eggshells here to know what happens next. I want so much for Harry to find out that he is really Snape's son. Oh and curious also, how did Snape find out that Harry is really his son? Sorry about the novel. Can't wait for the next update. Author's Response: Lupin sent him the Map, which is what he had promised to give him. Harry has never had any adult in his life that he could trust. Well, there was Sirius, for a while, but to me their relationship was almost a reversed one, in a way, with Harry worrying about (rather than relying on) Sirius. It's unfortunate that the adults in his life don't realize that a lot of what Harry does that drives them crazy actually stems from his inability to confide in adults or trust that adults are doing something that's in his best interest. Harry will figure out (sort of) Hermione's gift in the next chapter. She does suspect that Hadrian is Harry, but she is nowhere close to considering the possibility of Snape really being his father. Your ideas about her gift are exellent! Snape found out about Harry being his son after Dumbledore's death left him basically in charge of everything to do with Harry. Thanks for reviewing, that was awesome! |
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