Poor Harry, things seem to be getting worse and worse.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 05 Jun 2008 3:11 am
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| Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous)
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Wow, this is really good, even though you have your own plot it is very cannon, i like it, I hope Ron and Hermione write to Harry soon!
Mmm, this is really good so far! You've managed to permeate the story with palpable despair. And it's a despair we don't expect - not only did Harry not kill Voldemort in the end, he seemingly disappeared off of the map of the wizarding world for not doing so.
Interesting...
-K
Very good so far. Your writing is interesting and your grammar is good so I'm looking forward to a wonderful story. I can't wait for updates.
More please? I'm really intrigued by what's happened so far, and I love your writing style.
*What* a opening! This looks incredible.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 21 May 2007 7:05 am
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| Reviewer: Rebecca (Anonymous)
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Good story so far. I hope to read more soon.
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