Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 6 18 Jul 2007 11:01 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I'm glad he finally got to get his letter and see newspapers.
Title: Chapter 6 18 Jul 2007 8:33 pm
Reviewer: Enildam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey, i've got no problem with over 10,000 words! :) great chapter, i can't wait to see the next one... all of the characters and emotions were spot on.

    Author's Response: As a reader I prefer chapters I can read in one sitting, and 10,000 words is pushing it. On the other hand, short chapters frustrate me, so I try not to do that, either.
Title: Chapter 6 18 Jul 2007 7:44 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an amazing chapter. I love how this is coming along. Finally, they're telling Harry things he's wanted to know and what they're saying is terrifying. You've covered all the bases I can think of. Nothing seems to be left unexplained. I like it!
Title: Chapter 6 18 Jul 2007 4:10 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Fantastic chapter! The list of headlines was awesome. Too much information- indeed. Harry got nothing before, and now he knows everything. Wow. The scene in the basement was intense. I love all the discussions in the chapter. Fantastic job. Thank you for the update. :)

    Author's Response:

    I wouldn't say he knows everything now, but he's certainly been clued in on a lot of what's been going on. How much of it he fully understands is a separate issue. There are actually a lot of loose ends in this chapter, but we'll have to wait until Harry processes what he's learned over the past few days and is able to start asking questions.

    I had fun with the headlines. They were a much simpler way to explain what's been going on in the wizarding world without having someone tell it to Harry. Just imagine the length of that conversation! I was really pleased when I came up with the idea.

Title: Chapter 6 18 Jul 2007 4:08 pm
Reviewer: mwc (Signed) [Report This]
    hhmmmmm, if too much information is as bad as too little, i know which one i would still prefer. (claps) really doing a good job with this fic, it really gets your emotions involved and the characters are excellently IN-character. really like the last sentence too, can very much see harry saying that (said it a few times myself). keep up the good work!!

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