Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 7 16 Mar 2008 8:08 am
Reviewer: Misty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for updating it's been ages! I think i have figures out whats going on here I can't wait till Harry...err Hadrian does too. And i can't wait till you explain what Snape and Lupin are doing spending so much time together. Thanks agian!
Title: Chapter 9 05 Mar 2008 1:00 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait to find out what the result of not actually taking the potion will be. I'm wondering if he won't be able to regain the "Harry" form again. And the interaction with Fred and George was really sad and scary. I've always been of two minds about F&G in canon--and it's certain they would be terrible enemies.

    Author's Response: Oh, it's quite a lot worse than that. Harry's making a very unfortunate mistake there.
Title: Chapter 9 03 Mar 2008 7:52 pm
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Please update soon - the issue with the appearance changing potion is driving me nuts. It seems there's much more there than meets the eye...
Title: Chapter 9 03 Mar 2008 4:50 pm
Reviewer: SH (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ohhh! *bounces*
    Poor Harry, from this new POV the twins are indeed evil *pouts*
    *wants to comfort Harry*
    Great story :)
Title: Chapter 9 03 Mar 2008 8:07 am
Reviewer: DeadTired (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *silence*...please update...You've completely won me over with that last scene.
    My favorite aspect to the story is Harry's deteriorating relationship with Lupin as a result of Sirius's death. Harry spends so little time mourning him in the Sixth book, I hated it. However I dislike some of Harry's reactions in the earlier chapter. I can't (and don't like to) picture Harry clinging to someone after they've spite him. I can understand the reasonining; in Ootp, harry deeply mourns the loss of Ron's friendship. However, Harry stands firm in his stance that Ron should admit wrong (at least until he sees Ron is ready to apologize). Lupin tries and fails to show compassion to Harry, often turning cold and bordering on showing outright dislike. Whatever his reaction, I like the conflict in his growing distance with Lupin.
    I love these lines:
    "He'd learned at the Dursleys that when someone was this angry with him, the only thing he could do was wait it out.
    Of course they didn't believe him. No one ever did." It's nice to see that the behaviors Harry's learned from the Dursleys apply to those close to Harry.
    I hope you update soon!
Title: Chapter 9 03 Mar 2008 6:07 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter. You make me feel so sorry for Harry. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 9 03 Mar 2008 6:02 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was really interested by Harry getting the Gryffindor behavior from the other POV; not too pleasant. He is also disappointed by Ron's reaction to Hadrian, which I also liked.

    I will read slash as long as it isn't Harry, and is well written with an ingenuous plot--"Blood Magic" comes to mind. Can't stand PWP, absurdities such as mpreg, and/or Draco Malfoy, a hugely boring (to me) character who figures in a lot of them. My objection is not to homosexuality, but to the fact most authors don't write a gay couple but a man/woman (or even woman/woman) in a disguised form. Their cluelessness goes beyond amusing to stupid. Your story has not (so far) made that mistake.
Title: Chapter 9 03 Mar 2008 5:53 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Yikes. Draco's own words coming out of Gred and Feorge's mouths? That's just plain creepy.

    Tonk's little not-to-subtle reminder was well done as well.

    Ron's going to be a real git about all of this isn't he? The twins too. Poor Harry. Nothing seems to go right for him does it?

    Of course, if it did that weould be really boring and nobody would ever have read the 7 books and then where would we be? *tee-hee*
Title: Chapter 9 03 Mar 2008 4:47 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    The meeting between Ron and Harry went pretty well. I wasn't too sure what the twins were up to but I'm glad they weren't pranking Harry. Great chapter and please update again soon!
Title: Chapter 8 24 Feb 2008 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A funny beginning for Harry's stay at Hogwarts. Things can only get messier. Can we get more Snape/Lupin in the future chapters? I like that aspect of the story a lot, especially Harry's angst about it.

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