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Title: Chapter 6 24 Feb 2008 10:02 pm
Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fudge is so perfect in this. I hate him and yet want to see more of him! He's also creepy and scary. It makes sense Lupin and Snape are desperate to keep Harry hidden. Fudge has something ugly in mind for poor Harry. I also liked the newspaper stories. I'm still really interested in finding out what Hermione really said.
Title: Chapter 5 24 Feb 2008 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm actually reading this for the second time. This is very good. I can totally feel for Harry, suspecting that Lupin is with Snape and being miserable about it.
Title: Chapter 8 24 Feb 2008 7:44 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, if Snape's not straight, he's at least bisexual, if he's supposed to be Harry's father.

    And as in a lot slash stories, *everybody's* gay, statistically not likely.

    That said, it's a good story, well written, could use a little humour.

    Author's Response:

    Everybody is not gay. The story is about Harry, from his point of view. The people closest to him happen to be gay. If I was writing about everybody in the wizarding world, they would obviously not all be gay, but I'm writing about these particular characters... who happen to be gay. Everyone being straight, as in canon, is just as unlikely. Right now, three people (one of whom is dead) are gay. Hardly everybody.

    Snape can be bisexual. If Harry was inclined to give it some thought, he would probably come to that conclusion, given that he knows Snape may have a son out there. But I don't think Harry is going to sit around pondering Snape's sexuality beyond what is right in front of his nose, which is Lupin/Snape.

    I'm glad you're enjoying the story despite not liking the slash... I think that's just not something that's very easy to agree on, just like pairings are not easy to agree on (regardless of if they're het or slash).

Title: Chapter 7 23 Feb 2008 8:14 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    At times, Lupin and Harry appear to know absolutely nothing about each other--perhaps accurately. Snape, however, knows what Harry's childhood was like, given the Occulmency lessons. So his insistence on Harry's ego, and Lupin's acceptance of it seem odd.

    Poor Lupin! Again he does *get* Harry, and expects things that don't come.
Title: Chapter 6 23 Feb 2008 7:48 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    (Yes, I'm rereading it.)

    I'm not sure Harry would try to make Lupin feel guilty about moving on; this suggests (1)Harry knew about the relationship with Sirius, and (2) Approved of it, neither of which are terribly likely. And...I thought Snape was straight?

    But the scene between Lupin and Harry is very good, and for once, Lupin shows some indication he understands adolescence--usually he and Snape appear to think that Harry should act like an adult, and they have both taught enough school to know how likely *that* is.

    So finally they tell him the truth, which seems like a plan. The withholding of the letter, though, seems like pure spite, given its contents.

    Author's Response:

    That's why it's AU. Snape can be straight in someone else's story. :-)

    I was planning to put in a Harry-finds-out-about-Sirius/Lupin scene, but it didn't fit anywhere. So the premise is that he knew, or suspected. Which doesn't man anyone else knows or suspects. I might still do something with it, so it isn't left hanging, if it fits in anywhere. Possibly when others find out that Snape and Lupin are pursuing a relationship.

Title: Chapter 5 23 Feb 2008 7:09 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It beats me why Lupin and Snape think Harry's behaviour is unacceptable when they treat him like a dog. Snape didn't thank him for his work, yet bitches about Harry's rudeness? Way to model proper behaviour, Snivellus. Frankly, they are lucky he is not suicidal.
Title: Chapter 8 17 Feb 2008 4:56 am
Reviewer: Mafalda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    More, please! I love this. The Snape and Lupin interaction is very well done and Harry's behaviour makes sense and is in character. Great fic.
    Thanks for the wonderful reading =)
Title: Chapter 8 03 Feb 2008 5:59 am
Reviewer: MistyMossflower (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story, I can't wait to find what happens next, especially since Harry is meeting with Ron.  Keep up the good work and I hope you can update again soon. ^_^
Title: Chapter 8 30 Jan 2008 6:11 pm
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it. NIcely done, very IC. It's hard to find a good Snape around here.
Title: Chapter 8 28 Jan 2008 4:24 am
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Woot! Thank you, thank you for the update. I love this story! Can't wait to get into the Snape and Harry stuff. They're just delicious when they fight...

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