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Title: Chapter 8 27 Jan 2008 9:12 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I feared you had abandoned this story, but this was a good, long chapter.

    On the adults v. Harry front, there's an arguments for giving both sides a good kicking.

    I take it the potion wasn't Polyjuice, even if they told him it was.
Title: Chapter 8 27 Jan 2008 7:21 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay!! So Harry gets to see his friend. Hooray! I just hope that Ron makes it there in time. Poor Ginny, and Hadrian is probably not making a good impression on her or anyone. I find myself wishing that she and Hadrian actually get together. but I bet Ron would have a LOT to say about that! About Hadrian's appearance - I'm wondering if this is his true appearance or if it's a disguise. And if it is a disguise, who is it from? Lovely chapter. Thank you for the update!

    Author's Response:

    Well, I won't lie, Harry/Ginny is definitely not my thing, and I have other plans for Ginny. But she is going to have a part in this story. Yey for pirate!Ginny... who says an eye patch isn't a fashionable accessory? :-)

    Well, Harry's true appearance is a bit of a mystery, isn't it? According to the Severitus Challenge, his true appearance cannot *poof* into being, and must instead reveal itself over time. Besides, he hasn't reached his birthday yet, so his true appearance should not be making itself known at this point in time. All of which means... at some point after Harry's birthday, his appearance will begin changing into its true form. Which presents a bit of a problem, considering he is already disguised as Hadrian Snape.

    Glad you're still enjoying this fic. I felt like it lost its momentum in this chapter, so I'm trying to plot out the next one so that it's more forward-moving. It's really amusing how less than one day (well, one evening, one night, and half of a morning) took almost 5,000 words to describe.

Title: Chapter 8 27 Jan 2008 7:12 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    I was thrilled to see the update. This continues to be a great story. I feel so sorry for poor Harry. I am anxious to see how you develop the relationship between him and Severus. So far you have done a good job of depicting the tension. I hope RL lets you update soon and regularly. Thank you for your work on this story.

    Author's Response: Now that they're 'officially' father and son, I'm sure they'll have loads of opportunities to interact. I'm looking forward to that myself, actually. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 8 27 Jan 2008 7:05 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I'm glad to see that Harry will get to see Ron. Hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Yes. I was planning to torture him a bit longer but my beta said poor Harry needed just ONE darn thing to go his way. So I've given him a break.  :-) In my draft Snape was going to say something like "Under no circumstances are you to mention meeting or even hearing about Hadrian Snape, and if you disobey me I will rip out your liver and make you watch me boil it in one of my cauldrons."
Title: Chapter 7 23 Jan 2008 4:56 am
Reviewer: ouch! (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Crap. I can't believe you ended it right there. I want to read more! I was cringing everytime Lupin lost his temper with Harry. I kept expecting him to blow up. I didn't think he would take it so well.
    And i'm really interested as to what's Snape's reaction is going to be when Harry is sorted. And if the prophecy is still the same. Please update.
Title: Chapter 7 30 Dec 2007 11:33 pm
Reviewer: jellylegs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Where'd ya go?? It's been awhile since you updated...please continue! It's good.
Title: Chapter 7 23 Nov 2007 8:40 pm
Reviewer: Caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loving this, hope you add some more soon!!
Title: Chapter 7 04 Nov 2007 12:31 am
Reviewer: SentinelHuntress (Signed) [Report This]
    wowowowwww!!
    Just finiehsd it and well, I'm torn between liking and hating it ;)
    I mean I can understand Harry being furious about not being told anything in advance but also understand the adults for not telling him ...
    It is a a damn well written story so far and I'm looking forward to see how the relationship(s) will develop. So, I hope for an update sometime soon :)
Title: Chapter 7 23 Oct 2007 3:28 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I know I ought to have reviewed each chapter but I just had to keep clicking "next". An excellent read and I definitely love your take on the Severitus Challenge. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Title: Chapter 7 04 Oct 2007 9:42 pm
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, the correct thing to say is probably something like, "No doubt, RL is keeping you occupied quite thoroughly. Neverthless, I hope you can post soon, b/c I enjoy the story and am anxious to see what happens next..." But a more realistic comment would be something in the nature of, "IT'S BEEN A MONTH...I'm dying here... please (gasp) ... need update ..." ;-)

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