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Reviews For For The Boy Who Has Everything
Thanks for the update! it was great!
Author's Response: There's going to be more on that, and the potion will be pretty important to the story in the next few chapters. The things Harry is told are not necessarily the whole truth. Right now all we know is that Harry drank something that he was told is polyjuice, and instantly transformed into someone else (someone who looks the way Harry thinks Snape's son would look). Harry, of course, has been told that Snape has a son, and therefore thinks he has been turned into a replica of Snape's son. For now he has no reason to be suspicious of the potion. I hope that sort of answers your question. :-)
Author's Response: Yes, Harry is going to have a hard time working out his authority figure / father figure issues in the future. Most people just settle for manipulating him rather than try to explain things in a way that will let him make good choices. It's not healthy at all. Snape is definitely determined to have Harry in Slytherin, or at least he has already said that Harry won't be in Gryffindor.
Particularly in the early chapters, you have excellent control of mood and tone; it's almost painful to read, the sense of isolation and abandonment and guilt and unease surrounding Harry is palpable. I look forward to seeing the story continue. Sincerely, Annette Author's Response: Thank you. :-) I'm glad you like Snape and find my Lupin at least somewhat believable, considering that he's different from his usual uber-patient limp-doormat self.
Author's Response: Yeah, it seems like Harry's always safest when pretending to like (and be liked by) Snape. I guess no one but us fanfic authors/readers can believe it!
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