That was cute. I would die for anyone I loved if I had too...nice. waiting for more.
I'm not sure what your name is on FF.net, but I *know* I've read this story before. Despite it being a repeat, though, I enjoyed what there is of it here, and I'm looking forward to an update! I especially like the conversations/interaction between Snape and Harry. I can't really imagine Snape being that nauseatingly sweet, but you wrote it believably nonetheless--if that makes any sense. ;-) You write, I'll read. :-D