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Reviews For Brothers and Fathers
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.
You need a beta reader too by the way. If you have one, fire them and get one who speaks English. Author's Response: The first few chapters of my story are not beta'd, chapters 9+ are however. And though you may not believe me Serentiy will not have a huge part in this story for quite sometime. I won't claim that she isn't a Mary-Sue, but despite this chapter and one other she has a minimal part in the story. I only ask that you give her and the story a chance. I haven't had the oppurtunity to post everything I have written on this site, but everything through chapter twelve is posted on fanfiction.net. Here is the exact website: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3487010/1/ As for having an obsesion with Serenity's apperance, she's the first non-snape related character I've had to describe so far, with the other's I tried to allow the readers imagination of what snape looked like to affect both Snape's father as well as Harry's new appearance. As I said before, all that I ask is that you give this story a chance to build. Thank you for the review. DaughterOfAres. |
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