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Reviews For Brothers and Fathers
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the new reviews! Though I do feel a need to apologize for the leas than stellar writing. Lol, this was my first fic ever posted. I was still a teenager. Hopefully I've gotten better since this. I am still proud of this idea however, ngl. I'm pretty sure this was the 1st HP fic posted on ff.net to challenge the idea of Tobias being abusive. And def one of the first to show harry and snape as brothers. Thank you again for all the love and comments! <3 Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the new reviews! Though I do feel a need to apologize for the leas than stellar writing. Lol, this was my first fic ever posted. I was still a teenager. Hopefully I've gotten better since this. I am still proud of this idea however, ngl. I'm pretty sure this was the 1st HP fic posted on ff.net to challenge the idea of Tobias being abusive. And def one of the first to show harry and snape as brothers. Thank you again for all the love and comments! <3
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'oldest and youngest' I noticed this problem farther along in the story...it's older (or elder) and younger when it's two, and oldest (or eldest) and youngest when it's three or more. Here there are two, so it's older and younger; defiantly (I think you mean definitely); cloths (clothes) Maybe, I can assist (comma is not right here. 'Maybe--I can assist' or "Maybe...I can assist' scans better) Harry, cleaning the shed? (should be: "Harry cleaning the shed?) Dursley's brought up (Dursleys) Author's Response: Well someone had to stand up for the boy. (huge grin). Sev and Serenity are kind of cute...*sigh*.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad someone likes Serenity. I hope you get something to eat soon. |
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