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Title: What is this Feeling? 20 Jan 2024 1:21 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The scene at Hogwarts was terrific -- great therapy! The brotherly dynamic has happened fast, but is fun.
Title: What is this Feeling? 18 Feb 2019 7:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A lovely fun chapter at the end thank you
Title: What is this Feeling? 24 Sep 2015 10:06 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Glitter, glue, and honey... what a sight that must have been! Rofl!
Title: What is this Feeling? 11 May 2015 12:13 pm
Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was an amazing chapter. I wish I could rate it more than a ten. I love how they bond in here. Especially over how he helps him get over the events of the year past and the prank in particular. I was laughing so hard I was afraid I would wake up my family and find them asking why I was laughing while looking at me like crazy. I than decided to pull a small prank and sent a really long text to my twin for when they wake up. I hope they will smile and laugh and be annoyed at the longevity of it. You're a brilliant author and I am happy you wrote and posted this wonderful story. Cheers and ta!:)
Title: What is this Feeling? 08 Jan 2011 6:38 am
Reviewer: faithintheboys (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying this. I really like the dynamic. It's quite interesting!
Title: What is this Feeling? 16 Jan 2008 8:33 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked Severus' solution to Harry's nightmares very much. Worked a treat, too. Tobias' tirade also shows he can be hasty and unfair, that is, human.

    And though the prank is funny (and a nice change of pace) and their subsequent interaction very well rendered, I don't know a soul that wouldn't wake up if honey was being smeared on his hands and face.

    portkey is not hyphenated;

    "Don't just stand (there);

    "anything to extraordinary" (too)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    My reasoning behind Tobias's tirade was that we know from the books and previous chapters of this story that Harry and Severus are both flawed. It didn't seem right to have Tobias as a perfect human being and not them.

    And I agree not one on earth could stay alseep through what Harry did to Severus, but...well it was just so cute. :P

    Thanks for the review!

Title: What is this Feeling? 25 Nov 2007 9:10 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    This is probably my favorite chapter out of all of them. I know, I've already reviewed on Brothers fathers and professors, but I just thought I'd review here too. This is the best story on here, I'm serious. I notice you reply to reviews really soon after they're written. I geuss you're like me, checking the computer every chance you get huh?
    Hey, if you get a chance, not meaning to bother you or anything, and I know I shouldn't be putting this in a review, but if you could, would you go read my bio? I need some input on what I've posted there. Thanks sooooo much! Again, I love your story, I laughed so hard at the glitter thing, and the little moments between Sev and Harry are so sweet. I absolutely LOVED the part when Sev took him into the pensieve. Yelling at the Death Eaters and Voldemort was a really good thing. Thanks so much for posting your stories, and I can't wait for the next chapter on the sequel!
    -Your #1 Fan, Elise.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for the wonderful review! Your right I check my mail as frequently as possible. I honestly don't know how people survived before the internet. I just finished reading your bio and I've sent you a message through potionsandsnitches. I'm honored that you enjoy my story so much. The glitter thing was one of my favorites as well. My next chapter will be up as soon as possible.

    Thanks for the review!

    DaughterOfAres

Title: What is this Feeling? 10 Jun 2007 10:29 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good capter.
Title: What is this Feeling? 28 May 2007 12:35 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww, great chapter! I loved it! :) The number of days that Tobias is away seems to change though. First he was leaving Saturday and coming back Tuesday. That's like 3 days. Then he says he'll be gone for a few days, and now with only a day or so left, he says he'll be back in a couple of days. You might want to look into that when it's being beta'd. :)

    I really enjoyed the chapter! Glitter! LOL. And honey. oh, fun. XD
Title: What is this Feeling? 28 May 2007 10:22 am
Reviewer: aspin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked this chapter a lot. Good job.

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