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Reviews For Brothers and Fathers
And though the prank is funny (and a nice change of pace) and their subsequent interaction very well rendered, I don't know a soul that wouldn't wake up if honey was being smeared on his hands and face. portkey is not hyphenated; "Don't just stand (there); "anything to extraordinary" (too) Author's Response: Thanks! My reasoning behind Tobias's tirade was that we know from the books and previous chapters of this story that Harry and Severus are both flawed. It didn't seem right to have Tobias as a perfect human being and not them. And I agree not one on earth could stay alseep through what Harry did to Severus, but...well it was just so cute. :P Thanks for the review!
Hey, if you get a chance, not meaning to bother you or anything, and I know I shouldn't be putting this in a review, but if you could, would you go read my bio? I need some input on what I've posted there. Thanks sooooo much! Again, I love your story, I laughed so hard at the glitter thing, and the little moments between Sev and Harry are so sweet. I absolutely LOVED the part when Sev took him into the pensieve. Yelling at the Death Eaters and Voldemort was a really good thing. Thanks so much for posting your stories, and I can't wait for the next chapter on the sequel! -Your #1 Fan, Elise. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review! Your right I check my mail as frequently as possible. I honestly don't know how people survived before the internet. I just finished reading your bio and I've sent you a message through potionsandsnitches. I'm honored that you enjoy my story so much. The glitter thing was one of my favorites as well. My next chapter will be up as soon as possible. Thanks for the review! DaughterOfAres
I really enjoyed the chapter! Glitter! LOL. And honey. oh, fun. XD
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