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Title: What is this Feeling? 28 May 2007 10:00 am
Reviewer: Abe (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Here's a few hints for a better story: 1. Lose the Mary Sue. Nobody likes them. 2. Learn to spell and how to use proper punctuation and grammar. 3. Get a beta reader. 4. Did I mention lose the Mary Sue? 5. 'Cloth' is fabric. 'Clothes' are something you put on. You've made this error throughout the story. You also don't seem to know the difference between 'your' and 'you're.' I suggest you learn.
Title: What is this Feeling? 28 May 2007 9:03 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice prank on Snape! :)

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