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Reviews For Brothers and Fathers
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Problems: if Severus is a parselmouth, wouldn't he have heard the basilisk in Harry's second year? parsalmouth (it's parselmouth); basicially (basically) smug innocents (innocence) Author's Response: Thanks! I thought about the basilisk thing, but decided to take a liberity and two and ignor it. Of course, there is the possibility that he was just never around at the right to hear it? Thanks for the review!
other then that I really like your story so far!
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