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Title: Any Dream Will Do 20 Jan 2024 1:39 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, that’s a prank gone awry. This should be fun! I love how Tobias handled Sirius.
Title: Any Dream Will Do 18 Feb 2019 8:09 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter I love Tobias!
Title: Any Dream Will Do 24 Sep 2015 11:29 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy.... 2 ten-yr old boys who have been abused and know nothing about each other... hmmmm.

    Cute chapter. Glad Harry responded so quickly to Tobias.

    --his
Title: Any Dream Will Do 16 Jan 2008 10:48 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Tobias v. the Order is terrific; good characterization; lots of humour; and some angst.

    I particularly liked the bit where you said, "the children went upstairs to pla...err...entertain themselves."

    excruciatingly slow(ly);

    Dumbledore(-)like;

    Tobias's (Tobias');

    motivated then him (than);

    messaged his abused throat (massaged);

    not so shocked (ing);

    in the America's (Americas--it's not possessive);

    twin's potion (twins');

    were more astound (astounded);

    to s(t)ay here the night.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

Title: Any Dream Will Do 10 Jun 2007 11:05 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.
Title: Any Dream Will Do 29 May 2007 5:37 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whooooo! Awesome change! Tehe! Wow, I did not see that coming. How cool! I really like how Harry and the twins and everyone, including myself, see Severus as an older brother. I'm thinking Bill Weasley's kind of close to Severus' age so of course the twins would think he'd be fun to prank. Wow, how fun! The problem is, that older brother can always get their younger brothers back much worse!

    Awesome, awesome story so far! I really loved this part, when Ron and Harry met:
    "They stopped face to face, literally: Harry had grown enough that he and Ron were the same height." Yay!

    Being young for Two weeks! Awesome. This should be really fun. I think it might be cool if Harry reaged a couple of days before Severus. Could be fun to explore that possibility, or maybe create an AU one-shot?

    Sirius was a surprise, but not that much. I feel for him, I really do. He should love Harry, but he is immature. Why doesn't Harry still like him? He should at least. I felt that it was a little off that Harry didn't try to get Tobias off of Sirius when he was choking him, but maybe Harry was stunned. Doesn't Sirius WANT Harry anymore?

    I thought that as soon as the potion landed on Severus, that Molly should have been furious with the twins and laid into them. It seemed a little off that she didn't XD

    But awesome twist! I'm loving it! Great job!
Title: Any Dream Will Do 28 May 2007 9:20 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice twist with the deaging part!

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