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Title: Lesson Number One 21 Jan 2024 12:39 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the unexpected visitor!
Title: Lesson Number One 18 Feb 2019 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that’s a good cliffhanger
Title: Lesson Number One 17 Jan 2008 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Liked the interaction here: Tobias teaching Harry to salute properly in the naval manner was in particular a nice moment. Sev is in character, but I noticed he called Tobias 'Daddy' when sick, so even he has his moments. And then, ye evil cliffy!

    Dursley's (Dursleys);

    "Sev, is sick Harry" ("Sev is sick, Harry")

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    The good news about the cliffy is that the next chapter is allready posted. :) I enjoyed the scene were Tobias taught Harry to salute as well, but you're the first person to mention it in a review. I was begining to think that it wasn't as good of a scene as I imagined.

    Thanks for the reveiw!

Title: Lesson Number One 31 Jul 2007 6:24 am
Reviewer: GMPotter (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't know if your beta went over every chapter but she missed a few spelling mistakes. It is a good story and I plan on keeping up with it but you might want to see about getting another beta to look over it after she did her part just to make sure everything checks out.

    April

    Author's Response: Actually I didn't get a beta until about chapter 11, so the first few have not been beta'd yet. However the are in the process of revision. Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Lesson Number One 01 Jun 2007 12:07 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story!!!
Title: Lesson Number One 31 May 2007 6:20 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW! I was soooo not expecting that! I don't know how I feel about her coming back... there's probably drama ahead! Whoo!

    Lovely camping scene! Aw, and poor Severus got sick. One thing: A half a mile is nothing. I used to sprint a half mile in under 2 minutes. Of course that was on a track in a race but... you might want to make it longer. Especially since they were supposed to end up back home late evening. Two miles would probably be a better distance for the family to go to to go camping (maybe a little less). But under four miles definitely. Four is probably too far away for ten year olds to walk.
Title: Lesson Number One 31 May 2007 6:06 am
Reviewer: SlytherinShadowKat (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting. I wasn't expecting "Mum" to show up; wonder how she'll change the family dynamic. Looking forward to more!

    Kate
Title: Lesson Number One 31 May 2007 5:28 am
Reviewer: WolfDragonDemon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi,
    I liked your fic it different from the norm. It had funny and serious parts, all in all I liked it and I hope you continue soon!
Title: Lesson Number One 31 May 2007 3:56 am
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH my, that was unexpected.
Title: Lesson Number One 30 May 2007 11:24 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh don't leave us there! Please update soon. By the way I'm glad that you're posting this story here. This site has been around for a while but it seems lately that the better authors are posting here and ffnet.

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