Title: Lesson Number One
| 17 Jan 2008 10:37 pm
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Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Liked the interaction here: Tobias teaching Harry to salute properly in the naval manner was in particular a nice moment. Sev is in character, but I noticed he called Tobias 'Daddy' when sick, so even he has his moments. And then, ye evil cliffy!
Dursley's (Dursleys);
"Sev, is sick Harry" ("Sev is sick, Harry")
Author's Response: Thanks!
The good news about the cliffy is that the next chapter is allready posted. :) I enjoyed the scene were Tobias taught Harry to salute as well, but you're the first person to mention it in a review. I was begining to think that it wasn't as good of a scene as I imagined.
Thanks for the reveiw!