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Reviews For Brothers and Fathers
Severus' reaction is really good; he's furious. Harry--no surprise--is curious. And Tobias' reaction is injurious (rhyme time!) He knows he shouldn't, but he does anyway. I suspect this is the source of Harry's Gryffindor side. The dialogue between Harry and Eileen is very good; I suspect that she is not as hard-hearted as she likes to pretend, but she certainly is no nuturer. "(Y)ou found out about Harry."; "burry his head" (bury); spit-fire (spitfire); grandparents house (grandparent's); ten(-)years(-)old; youngest son (younger); dont't get to(o) close; I gave up to(o); Harry('s) parentage; with a shock(ed) expression; Author's Response: Thanks! I have said it before, but Tobias is one of my favorite characters, because of this, he can't be perfect. He has to be flawed. Eileen is his tragic flaw. In the next couple of chapters Severus's feelings on Eileen's return will be revealed in greater depth. Thanks for the review!
I'm glad I just started reading this story. It's great! I can't wait for more.
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