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Title: How to Kick a Dog 21 Jan 2024 1:01 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Eileen is bad news. It’s heartwarming to see Tobias as a dad to his two youngsters.
Title: How to Kick a Dog 18 Feb 2019 8:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good chapter
Title: How to Kick a Dog 18 Jan 2008 5:39 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    He could do well to wonder. And so we meet Tobias' weak spot: Eileen.

    Severus' reaction is really good; he's furious. Harry--no surprise--is curious. And Tobias' reaction is injurious (rhyme time!) He knows he shouldn't, but he does anyway. I suspect this is the source of Harry's Gryffindor side.

    The dialogue between Harry and Eileen is very good; I suspect that she is not as hard-hearted as she likes to pretend, but she certainly is no nuturer.

    "(Y)ou found out about Harry.";

    "burry his head" (bury);

    spit-fire (spitfire);

    grandparents house (grandparent's);

    ten(-)years(-)old;

    youngest son (younger);

    dont't get to(o) close;

    I gave up to(o);

    Harry('s) parentage;

    with a shock(ed) expression;

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    I have said it before, but Tobias is one of my favorite characters, because of this, he can't be perfect. He has to be flawed. Eileen is his tragic flaw. In the next couple of chapters Severus's feelings on Eileen's return will be revealed in greater depth.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: How to Kick a Dog 10 Jun 2007 11:44 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.
Title: How to Kick a Dog 05 Jun 2007 4:06 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Snape boys. That Eileen is a downright bitch.
    I'm glad I just started reading this story. It's great! I can't wait for more.
Title: How to Kick a Dog 03 Jun 2007 9:26 pm
Reviewer: animealam (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter, and quite interesting to see Eileen's motives for leaving her sons.
Title: How to Kick a Dog 03 Jun 2007 7:16 pm
Reviewer: GoldenPhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderfull story. Do update soon
Title: How to Kick a Dog 02 Jun 2007 10:59 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Is Tobias under a spell or something that makes him keep forgiving Eileen? Excellent story so far and hopefully more soon!
Title: How to Kick a Dog 02 Jun 2007 9:21 pm
Reviewer: Filodea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is great! I love the interaction between Severus & Harry. The brother stuff seems very true to life.
Title: How to Kick a Dog 02 Jun 2007 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm having mixed feeling about Eileen. So I'll just wait for the next chapter. This was another wonderfully written chapter keep up the good work.

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