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Title: In the Dark of the Night 22 Jan 2024 1:46 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, what a cliffhanger! Snape’s offer was awesome. The chapter end sent shivers down my spine.
Title: In the Dark of the Night 19 Feb 2019 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: In the Dark of the Night 25 Sep 2015 1:35 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    '... the bright jet of light...' better not be green! evil author!

    --his
Title: In the Dark of the Night 21 Jan 2008 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The argument between Tobias and Eileen, with the strong sexual component, and her shrewdness at manipulating him, is very well done.

    The boys saluting their Dad is another nice moment, as is his mixed feelings about their reaging;

    Harry's concern about what he's told the ten-year-old Severus is also good; as is Severus' feelings in the matter.

    their (they're) reaged;

    deadly quite (quiet) voice;

    houses (house's) occupants;

    leaving, Harry alone with the adults...(No, he's not alone, and the comma's misplaced, so: "...leaving Harry with the adults...")

    twins(') room;

    quit(e) a bit of respect;

    to his son's (sons);

    a bit faster then (than) expected;

    Hypothetically(-)speaking;

    fifteen-year-old;

    Eileen crawling into bed (thinking) that her life...

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    You're one of the few people who like the scene between Tobias and Eilleen. Most thought it seemed out of place.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: In the Dark of the Night 04 Jul 2007 2:27 pm
Reviewer: jay_09 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    argh he's not dead is he? He can't be dead. That would just...well it's wrong....sort of. Your story though. Please please tell me you haven't abandoned this story and that you are going to update this story soon. Oh and can harry kick some butt. pls pretty please...or you know whatever it is you have decided.
Title: In the Dark of the Night 02 Jul 2007 2:32 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, that is just mean and cruel to leave it at that point. And please don't kill off Harry's dad. Great story-I love Tobias s. How did LV see through the Fidelis on Grimmald Place? Only Dumbledore could have given him the address.
Title: In the Dark of the Night 28 Jun 2007 8:59 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How are you going to explain Voldemort finding Grimmauld Place? Only the secret keeper can reveal the location. Given the problem with Peter Pettigrew the first time around, there's no way anyone but the leader of the Order would be named Secret Keeper - so how does he find the house?

    Other than that question, I LOVE the story. The characterizations are excellent. Snape is not fluffy as he becomes in some stories. And you get a chance to see where some of his stern nature comes from. Keep up the great writing.
Title: In the Dark of the Night 28 Jun 2007 8:16 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You can't stop there! Please update soon! I hope Tobias is not dead. Can't imagine why he did not hear anything. How did Voldemort get past the Fidelious charm?
    Please update soon!
Title: In the Dark of the Night 28 Jun 2007 7:09 am
Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! NOOOO! Tobias is... green lighted? NOOO! Voldie is in HQ? AND YOU LEFT HIM THERE!??? Come back here! You can't let him in there! Oh brother. We're in for a long, hard wait. I hope Harry gets him this time.
Title: In the Dark of the Night 28 Jun 2007 5:09 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Noooooooooooo! Not a cliffy! Pretty please with cherries on top and lots of whipped cream and whatever else you'd like on it update again soon!!

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