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Reviews For Brothers and Fathers
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mostly asleep (sleeping); Iron barred (iron-barred); Dark Lords (Lord's) throne room; You pathetic, piece of Hippogriff dung; (the comma should go) I leaned (learned) very early; Harry's curiousity piped (piqued); Author's Response: *sigh* I don't write Voldemort well. As hard as I tried, I couldn't not make him sound cliche. And yes: Eileen is very fun to write. I meant the Princess to be a pun since her maiden name was Prince. I meant to italics the 'Prince' part but I guess it got overlooked. Thanks for the review!
I thought voldy was brilliant. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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