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Title: There's Always a Rat 22 Jan 2024 1:52 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is gripping! What a cool cast of characters that have been thrown together.
Title: There's Always a Rat 19 Feb 2019 9:09 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Voldemort is fine, thank you a great chapter
Title: There's Always a Rat 25 Sep 2015 1:48 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, if Voldy wanted an Order meeting all he had to do was ask.... lol.

    --his
Title: There's Always a Rat 22 Jan 2008 8:50 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Voldemort acts a little cliche here, I think. ("You dog! You got me monologuing!") And Eileen as well. She must be a bargeload of fun to write, she is such a character, but I think she'd mention world domination like she'd hug her sons. Leave it at "I serve no one" if you want her to reject the offer; if she did accept it (which she might if she thought strategically), she'd be cool about it. (Why does Voldemort call her 'Princess'?)

    mostly asleep (sleeping);

    Iron barred (iron-barred);

    Dark Lords (Lord's) throne room;

    You pathetic, piece of Hippogriff dung; (the comma should go)

    I leaned (learned) very early;

    Harry's curiousity piped (piqued);

    Author's Response:

    *sigh* I don't write Voldemort well. As hard as I tried, I couldn't not make him sound cliche. And yes: Eileen is very fun to write. I meant the Princess to be a pun since her maiden name was Prince. I meant to italics the 'Prince' part but I guess it got overlooked.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: There's Always a Rat 13 Jul 2007 2:06 am
Reviewer: Smelly Cat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ahhggg!! you can't leave me here!!.........but you just did.
    I thought voldy was brilliant.
    I can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: There's Always a Rat 06 Jul 2007 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I think you did a good job on Voldemort although I'm surprised he didn't do anything to Harry yet. I imagine Harry's scar hurt with Voldie around as well. Peter owes Harry a life debt... will he help them at all?
Title: There's Always a Rat 06 Jul 2007 4:50 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Voldemort was perfect. And so was Eileen and Tobias. Now who walked through the door???

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