I’m liking this strong, scrappy (and kind of unscrupulous) Eileen. Very exciting plot!
| Title: Good Morning Voldemort
| 19 Feb 2019 9:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Eileen is a mass of contradictions which make her a very interesting character thank you
I dont like here, and thats all I have to say
| Title: Good Morning Voldemort
| 25 Oct 2008 12:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Ridley Jack (Anonymous)
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Ok, I've been going along with this story because, hey, it's got a pretty good plot going on and it's interesting and even funny in some parts. But I just can't accept a few things, like why Voldemort wouldn't just kill the muggles. That's what he does, is it not? (I didn't comment on it in the previous chapter because I figured it was just because you needed them for the plot, and hey, why would you kill off one of your major characters?)
The thing that really gets me, though, is that Harry can throw off Voldemort's Imperius but not Eileen's? What? Ok, you tried to pass it off as Harry being emotionally distraught, but he was at the Tournament, too. He'd just seen Cedric die! If he can throw off Voldemort's curse, he can throw of Eileen's.
Not that I'm saying this is a bad story; it's quite entertaining when it's believable.
| Title: Good Morning Voldemort
| 22 Jan 2008 9:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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"What sons?" is a really bravura moment and completely in character. I salute you.
But...Tobias' joke about Eileen and vulvas is extremely funny but vulgar. In the character that you've drawn for him--very disciplined and upright--I doubt he'd make that sort of comment in front of a female adolescent (Hermoine). You could convey the basic joke sans graphic detail.
'Princess' of course it's a pun, and I'm too dumbass to get it. :)
I wondered if this was a pun, too: "I would like to get out of her before I die of old age", but though Tobias and Eileen have the hots for each other, I suspect you meant 'here.'
to loss (lose);
two(-)syllable;
thrown (throne) room;
earn you(r) love;
willing to give then (them) a try;
cloth(e)s;
cat(-)like;
it(')s (a) pity;
cell(')s occupants;
"Hissed Severus" and "Said Moody". NEVER capitalize "Hissed" or "Said" in this context.
then (than) a rumour;
boy(')s shoulder;
Eileen(')s actions;
parsalmouth (parselmouth)
| Title: Good Morning Voldemort
| 02 Aug 2007 8:45 am
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| Reviewer: Hell's Angel (Anonymous)
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Wow! This is such a great story! I never onve stopped to think about Sev's parents and you make them so realistic and wonderful! I also adored the brotherly bond that formed when they were 10 year olds (a pity they had to change back). I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Wonderful, wonderful work!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Terrific
Author's Response: Thanks
aww..... imperio'd Harry. I wonder if he'll be grateful for not having to deal with it all or be angry and having control taken away... hmmm...
Author's Response: You'll find out soon.
| Title: Good Morning Voldemort
| 23 Jul 2007 1:03 am
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| Reviewer: sevs (Anonymous)
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I formerly thought that Eileen wasn't very good for the story but i change my mind now.She's really advancing the plot and making the story more intersting to read.One question:Are you going to elaborate on what severus was doing in the sex room in Voldemort's place.It would be rather nice to know.Great story I think.Can't wait for the next chapter!>>>:P
Author's Response: I'm glad Eileen grew on you. I like her character. She's fun to write, even if she isn't the greatest person in the world. My favorite character in any story is always the most complex and thats how I tried to write Eileen. No I don't plan on elaborating on what Severus did in the sex room, but I may change my mind.
| Title: Good Morning Voldemort
| 19 Jul 2007 3:55 am
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| Reviewer: pOiSe (Anonymous)
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AMAZING!!!
*Faithful Reader*
Author's Response: Thanks.
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